Sunday, March 3, 2013

The Mag 158 Sunday March 3, 2013



photo by TheFoxAndTheRaven 



The Rain!

You pushed me away
when I wanted to stay
if you wanted me to go
why didn't you just say so

I gave you  my heart
I gave you my soul
whispers of love
into the night..

I sit drenched in a pouring rain
feeling raw and full of pain
if you wanted me to go
why didn't you just say so

somehow I'll see it through
hope you find your way
letting go difficult to do
in the wake of a new day

12 comments:

  1. This is heart wrenching and beautiful..

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    1. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment..I tried to capture what I felt in the pic.

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  2. Can be a hard thing to grasp, but a positive view can get one past. Very nicely spun under your sun.

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    1. Hi Pat,

      Thanks for spinning by..always nice!

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  3. the ache of your heart shades each word. lovely & melancholy.

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    1. Hi Paige,

      Thanks for the note!

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  4. and perhaps they will live to rue the day...smiles...
    letting go is not as easy as we make it sometimes...
    nice repetition in this as it evokes the feeling
    makes it almost lyrical...

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    1. Hi Brian,

      Thanks for the note! This is a portion of a larger piece of work that really is more of a song..I'm glad you could feel it.

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  5. Love is the most heartwrenching, thumb twisting, mind wrecking of emotions...

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    1. Hello,

      Thanks for stopping in and I agree love makes great fodder of thoughts..as with any emotion as it can be felt.

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  6. so much emotion in this...

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    1. Hello,

      Thanks for the read and reply..nice to meet you!

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