Saturday, April 20, 2013

dVerse April 20, 2013

Spring - open mic style












early am waiting for the crown of light to appear over the horizon
come with me let us drift for one day in golden sunshine
let our minds and hearts run free even if just for today
take my hand..let us travel to another land a garden of Eden
remove our cloaks run naked in spirit feel the warm heat on our skin
no need to hide our sins together together.
like children full of laughter in the delights of life..embracing our freedom 
wildflowers swaying in a spring breeze
   run wild with me
slip into a dream release soft screams holding tight for a moment in time
let us create our own exquisite rhyme
You and I lost in springtime
just for the day
  just for the day
drifting away
on the seeds of a dream
we spring to life

20 comments:

  1. I like how the ending imitates a drifting away.

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    1. Laurie,

      Thank you for reading and I always enjoy drifting away.

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  2. Such a day
    I like at my bay
    As two become one
    And just get lost in the sun

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    1. Pat,

      Thanks, I have to say such a day would be grand basking in the warmth of springtime.

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  3. Love the sentiments in your poem. The running wild, the drifting, the springing to life! Nice.

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    1. Hi Mary,

      Thanks so much and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. We are all longing for signs of spring to burst forth.

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  4. I like the sweet romantic ending lines ~ Good work on the springing to life theme ~

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    1. Hi Grace,

      Thanks so much..I must have a touch of spring fever.

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  5. Truedessa, your beautiful site, first time here! I love your madcap rambling, as pure as a little child and as wild as the wind. I know you are going to have a lovely Spring, what with your attitude of come-what-"May"! Inspiring and fun. Thanks, Amy Barlow Liberatore

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    1. Amy,

      Thank you so much for your kind words and for visiting my site. A pleasure to have you here. Spring holds the mystery of rebirth in one's life. I am looking forward to some new growth within.

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  6. Running barefoot, running wild - just the kind of spring I love the most.

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    1. Bjorn,

      Yes, barefoot and free is a great feeling.

      Thank you!

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  7. springing to life...barefoot on the lawn in the spring...sounds just perfect...love the carefree mood in this

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    1. Claudia,

      Thank so much! I enjoyed the prompt to write about something spring like and this is what spoke to me. A carefree feeling of newness as life grows around us the beauty of nature singing a tune.

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  8. Has a hint of child-like joy and abandon. Very nice!

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    1. Hi,

      Thanks so much for the read and reply. I was striving for fun from the daily grind of life. I bit of rebirth in the spring light.

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  9. I'm almost ashamed to admit what spring does to my Poetic Me. The operative word being almost. CLICK

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    1. Well, I don't think I'll venture there as spring is a state of mind I guess, operative word "almost"..laughing

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