Sunday, May 19, 2013

Mag169 - May 19th, 2013 - Lighthouse

Lighthouse Dandelions by Jamie Wyeth



In a field of dandelions
my  mind wanders in thoughts
I'm lost

magnificent light flickers in the night
my heart flutters,  wings of a moth
I pause

golden house star of guidance
my soul seeks refuge
I sigh

love in abundance growing fonder
a vision before my eyes
I cry

breathtaking view, wondrous life
the path leads me to you
I'm found




27 comments:

  1. Found you say
    Not lost at your bay?
    Lost can be more fun
    But then lost with someone
    Is just as grand
    Searching the land
    And dandelions are dandy
    They come in handy
    Cheap and easy to throw
    Can grab a whole bunch in a row
    But don't sigh or cry
    Just climb high
    Reach for the sky
    But hold on tight as you reach for if you don't, you may all an be squashed like pie haha

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    1. Good Evening Pat,

      Lost or found I'm not quite sure
      I agree lost can be fun as you
      find your way under the sun
      I do like dandelions, you see
      I like to make wishes on them
      as I blow their seeds into the winds
      of a dream..sometimes, it makes me scream
      thanks for stopping by, you bring a high
      Good Night my friend by your sea..

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  2. a beautiful path to discovery!

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  3. I enjoyed reading the poetic repartee above... and wanted to also say I enjoy the crispness of your lines and the large compactness of your vision.

    Glad I came to visit today!

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    1. Julie,

      Thank you for your lovely comment. I too am glad you came for a visit. Welcome...

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  4. Ardent yet tender; well done.

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    1. Berowne,

      So nice of you to come over to read my work. Thank you!

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  5. In a field of dandelions
    my mind wanders in thoughts
    I'm lost

    One often gets mesmerized when surrounded by good things. As long as one is in control it should be ok! Nicely Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. Hi Hank,

      Thanks for dropping in today so nice to see you here. Hope you are enjoying your day. Good things are always nice in life.

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  6. I fear I remain lost. Nicely written!

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    1. Thank you for the read and reply. Perhaps, you will find your way one day soon!

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  7. Dear Trudessa: you have poemed a beautiful waltz of love,
    emotion, nature - in short this poem is beautifully human.

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    1. Paige,

      Thank you so much for the lovely comment. It is appreciated always.

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  8. Good thing I found you
    So much better than happening on a wooden shoe
    Or kitty litter at some Canadian beach
    O do I love beautiful views so out of reach!
    Clicking those google pics for all to see
    Keeping my fingers crossed they'll too find me.

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    1. Hi Blue,

      How you found me I haven't a clue
      but, I am glad you did find your way
      perhaps, on a magic carpet you flew
      it seems we have so much to say
      I don't think a wooden shoe would do
      one can get lost in beautiful views
      so, take in all the shades of blue
      you might be surprised at what you
      will find, within that great mind...

      Hope you are enjoying your day!

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    2. Oh Blue,

      Thanks you so much for the wonderful surprise..smiles go miles..on the way to Bora Bora..

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    3. Pfft my kitty litter is fine
      It is so divine

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    4. I don't have anything against
      kitty litter or Canadian beaches
      in fact I love most any beach
      give me a chair and some sun and
      I'm having some fun..

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  9. Gorgeous love the hopeful ending!

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    1. Good Morning,

      Thank you so much for your kind words. Have a lovely day...

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  10. I followed the yellow brick road and was delighted with what i found, thanks

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    1. Good Morning,

      So glad you are delighted with what you found..I should thank you for taking the journey. Thank you!

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  11. Wow! that was something.

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    1. Hello,

      I hope that wow meant you enjoyed the poem. Have a lovely day.

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  12. ..I'm lost.. I pause... I sigh.. I cry.. I'm found... you have this perfectly layered in right position... if i'd written this i would do the same thing you did here... great take on that sad dandelion prompt... smiles...

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    1. Kelvin

      It is nice to see you my friend. Thank you for your kind words. I always appreciate your comments. Have a beautiful day!

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