A poetic blog to entertain my inner muse and express the ramblings of my heart.
" I Choose the Frequency of Love"
of course i am now humming total eclipse of the heart...ha...songs that echo in your soul...those are def the good ones....surrender away...smiles.
Hi Brian,Too funny now we will be singing that song all night..thanks for the comment..
This is beautiful. It floats like a dream Truedessa.typo in your title? Elcipse... I just did that the other day in one of mine...
Hello,Thanks for the lovely comment and also for the heads up. I just fixed it:)
I'm amazed how the sedoka can be transfigured so that it can fit a myriad of poetic styles, from the public to the personal. Here, for example, is one where it's made intensely personal.
Thank you for visiting and the comment. The prompt was interesting and fun to do..thank you for that inspiration.
Such a songCan do no wrongJust let it flowAnd away you'll goTo where I don't knowJust don't stub your toeOr whack your elbowMaybe a lawn you'll mow
Hi Pat,Do you care to sing-a-longwe could singall day long..always a pleasureto have you as a guestat my house..(smiling)
I can tryBut away you may flyAs I can't carry a tune in a bucketBut I say err umm duck it
We can be two out of tunejust singing the day awaywould be fun to do.
The first katuata reminded me of the beautiful ancient idea that the movement of the planets and stars created harmonic tones, the musica universalis. And then, moving into the harmonic tones of the heart in love--lovely!
Nico,Thanks you so much..what a lovely comment..I am moved by your words.
Smooth, sultry feel to this. Love it.
Hello,Thank you for the lovely note. Hope you have a lovely day..
Like Samuel said, this form seems very well suited to a multitude of styles. This worked wonderfully. Great write! -Mike
Mike,Thank you for the visiting and the thoughtful comment.
smiles...made the song total eclipse of the heart come to my mind... love the musical quality of your verse and the images work so well
Claudia,Good Morning, thank you for feeling the music.
Hi Paige,Thank you so much for the return visit.
Lovely romantic, sensual touch to this well-written sedoka, Truedessa.
Thanks for visiting and the lovely comment Victoria. I hope you have a beautiful day.
I feel the desire.Nice sedoka.
Thank you for the read and comment.
Wonderful in both symbolic and romantic ;-)
Hello again,Thank you for your wonderful words :)