Monday, August 19, 2013

Rebirth

Elena Kalis



blue water
pure sacrifice
submerged my spirit floats
transcending depths reflective pool
rebirth


new hope
unsinkable
divine inspiration
red ribbon symbol of my love
I breathe

posted for the mag 182

30 comments:

  1. And as long as you breathe there is hope
    Even hope of finding a sturdy rope lol
    Kinda morbid there I suppose
    But that is how my mind goes
    Be nice to jump in the sea
    and come out as renewed as a busy bee

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    1. There is always hope
      no need for a rope
      unless you plan to pull
      me to shore..or through
      a magical door...

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    2. haha I'll extend a rope
      As away we cope
      And the cat will pull you in
      He likes to run off with rope at our bin

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  2. Surely hope is swinging on the wings of her spirit, ever guiding her. Lovely reflection.

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    1. Hi Karen,

      Thank you for the lovely comment.

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  3. breathing under that water might be fatal....smiles...there is a wildness in that though...the new hope that is unsinkable willing to test those bounds...

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    1. Hi Brian,

      Ah true about breathing underwater..I love the water and swim every chance I get..it is liberating to me and I like the sensation of water on my skin..to breathe underwater is about slowing down and facing life's challenges when you feel like you're drowning. 'Unsinkable" determination to test those bounds..

      Always, a pleasure to converse as I enjoy your insight-fulness.

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  4. I love that image... I also love that she appears to be upright, although it could be flipped 90 degrees to the left and she would be submerged in the water... rising... waiting to break the surface...

    Interesting painting, dear...

    ~shoes~

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    1. Good Morning Shoes,

      Well upright is a good way to appear..strong in her balance almost dance like wouldn't you say..interesting take on the 90 degree move.."waiting to break the surface" I like the sound of that..I wonder what she see's in her reflection...

      Thanks so much for visiting..I enjoy your company..Hope today finds you in good spirits.

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    2. It's my pleasure to visit!! :o)

      ~shoes~

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    3. Shoes,

      Please don't stay away so long next time. I enjoy chatting with you.

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    4. Thank you... how sweet of you to say.

      I enjoy our visits as well! :oD

      ~shoes~

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  5. This is fantastic, I love the way it reads, the way its shaped, powerful and profound content wonderful

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    1. Good Morning,

      Thank you so much for the lovely comment.

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  6. Splendidly absorbing; good writing...

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  7. Worth reading more than once.

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  8. Surely something to have and to hold!

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    1. Thank you for the visit and kind reply.

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  9. Unsinkable sacrifice....such a pure concept ..cheers

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    1. Good Evening,

      Thanks and Cheers to you!

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  10. "unsinkable"

    Rebirth, reminding ourselves of who we are, finding our inner strengths, reinventing ourselves. Change is good!

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    1. Hi Ginny,

      Thanks so much and change can be good indeed.

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  11. Nice tender feel to this as one reads..love these lines
    ' could this moment be more than coincidence
    our consciousness drifts to a higher plane'

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    1. Dorianna,

      Hello, thanks for reading my poem the visit is appreciated.

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  12. THis piece is full of hope and courage. :-)

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    1. Thank you hope keeps us alive and courage helps us survive.

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