Thursday, August 15, 2013

Striking Chords

wikimedia - Music 8 oil & Collage
soft
blue
music
you and I
embracing bodies
dancing under golden moonlight

seduction warm strumming fingers
perfect harmony
striking chords
tonight
play
me



  A Fibonacci poem (based on syllables: 1,1,2,3,5,8 and reverse) posted for dVerse hosted by Tony Maude

37 comments:

  1. oo la....nice...a little love making, making music together....under the moonlight even...i like that...smiles.

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    1. Good Evening Brian,

      Thanks for the visit always a pleasure to read your comments. Hope you are well.

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  2. that is really sweet, creates a lovely image.

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  3. The shape even looks a bit like the cello, if you squint ;) Beautiful poem.

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    1. I think you are right it does sort of look like a cello. Thank you for the kind words.

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  4. Ooh la la, this is very hot!!! I need a fan. Smiles.

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    1. Thanks Mary...how are those dogs doing of yours..they are so cute.

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  5. Who can resist the invitation ~ Love the shape too ~

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  6. Wonderful shape, and so very sensual!

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    1. Nice of you to visit thanks for the nice reply.

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  7. Hmmm. An erotic geometry. i like!

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    1. Hi Susan,

      I'm glad you liked it...

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  8. Now there's an invitation that's hard to refuse ...

    Nicely written - I like a lot ... smiles

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    1. Good Morning,

      Thanks so much I am glad you like it...

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  9. hmmm...nice musical take on this...i'm all for a bit of dancing you know...smiles

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    1. Claudia,

      Dancing is always nice..hope you have a day filled with music.

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  10. Nice shape and fits perfectly with the picture. I pictured 18th century and a mandolin, seductive and beckoning.

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    1. Thank you..a mandolin hmmm I think I hear it in the distance.

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    1. Thank you, music can be very alluring.

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  12. Oh look at you go
    Here at your show
    Hitting high notes here and there
    Plus adding in plenty of low ones at your lair
    Play me
    Could make me go on a spree
    But the cat will be good
    Today in your hood

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    1. Hitting notes at my show
      just going with the flow
      glad the cat will be kind
      as it eases my weary mind
      but, with him you never
      know what you will find..(lol)

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    2. All weary today
      There at your bay
      Hope you get some rest
      And get filled with zest

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  13. Lovely sensual write.
    Anna :o]

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  14. ...aww, excellent... and so perfectly tuned i can read it & even sing it endlessly... mesmerizing...yes... yes... loved it... smiles...

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    1. Hi Kelvin,

      Thank you for visiting I always enjoy reading your uplifting comments. I hope you are well my friend.

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  15. Excellent. Lovely, soft, sensual feel throughout. :)

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    1. Thanks for visiting and the lovely comment.

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  16. What a great image, along with your writing.

    Chords can me mesmerizing... sometimes they are perfect and tonal.. others can create such dissonance...

    I love them all.

    ~shoes~

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    1. Hi Shoes,

      I am glad you enjoyed my poem and the pic is one of my favorites all those different shades of blue just reaches out to me.

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