Thursday, August 1, 2013

Three Tweets of Love











catching a ride on a passing cloud
drifting high above the busy crowd
hearing my thoughts and beating heart
life pulsating through my veins

i feel no pain float with me
in unison, no need to wear a coat
moist warm lips flutter kiss my throat
feel the passion you stir within me

falling from grace to touch your face
you take my breath away dancing on
the edge of desire singing songs
making love above the city lights

posted for dVerse poetry 140 characters at a time.. twitter length stanzas

33 comments:

  1. Getting all kinky at your sea
    Joining the mile high club are we? lol
    Staying above and seeing the lights
    Would sure be such sights
    Although I don't think they'll get as much attention
    Maybe just a passing mention

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  2. Hi Pat,

    It's just me dreaming with my head in a cloud. Tweet #4

    Walking the streets of darkness
    who will be my light, who will
    see me through, my candle flickers
    a flame of hope in a world
    lost in despair

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  3. The cat will shine a light
    Although if you want it bigger it could be a fright
    As he'll back up his little rhyming umm mass
    and simply pass some gas
    That will increase the light
    Getting you through the night

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    1. oh Cat I am feeling blue
      shine that light in my soul
      but, I'll pass on the gas
      just make the light last..

      Have a great night!

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  4. falling from grace to touch your face...smiles...i like that...there is a giving up for love in that to me...
    and hey i am on vacation in the city right now...might need to put those city lights to use...haha

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    1. Hi Brian,

      Thanks for the note..you are always so kind. I hope you enjoy your vacation in the city. I'm not sure what city but, wherever you journey be safe and have fun.

      Peace & Light

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  5. I'd love to catch a ride on a drifting cloud!

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    1. Thank you Laurie..would be wonderful to float around..

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  6. The first stanza reminds me of long summer days, where I stare at the clouds for so long, it is as if I'm floating on them.

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    1. I agree and I enjoy cloud watching on a summer day.

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  7. soothingly romantic
    better than a gaudy flying carpet

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    1. lol..aprille that is funny but a magic carpet ride might be fun..just think of the adventures.

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  8. I like what you've done with these. I never thought to rhyme on twitter. Now I can't think why not!

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    1. I guess it's easy to rhyme on twitter..just remember only 140 characters..have a nice night.

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  9. hmmmm....making love on the floating clouds..that sounds wonderful to me...

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    1. Yes, cloud floating would be divine..hope you are doing well.

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  10. Catching a ride on a passing cloud... a lovely thought

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    1. Bjorn, Nice to see you again..thank you..

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  11. I'm thinking you're on the balcony of a skyscraper - it gets very floaty feeling up there, I imagine. Lovely use of language here.

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    1. Oh, that is a lovely image for sure the balcony of the 21st floor perhaps.

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  12. ...catching a ride on a passing cloud --- ah, i will ne'er get tired of doing that... your verses are very lovely to read with that added effort to rhyme... excellent... smiles...

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    1. thank you Kelvin my friend..nice to see you again.

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  13. Very sensual write-- and this form seems to have led well into the flow of your thoughts...terse, yet full. Nice~ Jason

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    1. Jason,

      Thank you so much for your comment. Hope you have a nice weekend.

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  14. Lovely to be able to express such love in 140 characters x3 and catching a cloud. :0)

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    1. Hello Victoria,

      This was a fun prompt trying to get it said in 140 characters.

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  15. Nice passion--we all need someone to share our cloud with. Well done!

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    1. Thanks so much Nico..it is nice to see you again.

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  16. So heartfelt and so true... you decant your emotionality into the 140-character crystal like a selected wine.

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    1. Good Morning,

      First, thank you for the interesting prompt it was fun to participate and your reply is lovely.

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    2. You're very welcome! Looking forward to more of your poetry!

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