Tuesday, November 26, 2013

Autumn's Last Bloom



Fall pushes onward, crisp pine air
crunching leaves, brisk autumn day
shadowy trees sway, branches bare
beautiful flowers have faded away

caressing warm moments, new dawn
wrapped in a thick quilt of dreams
two silhouettes, curtains softly drawn
moonlight peeking, crystal  beams

bed of chrysanthemum full  bloom
healing  petals reaching out for you
scent of fall lingers, filling the room
sunlight, captures my field of view

loves rapid beat, resides in my heart
caught in quiet splendor,  I fall apart

posted for dVerse Open Link Night


32 comments:

  1. nice...i like the bed of the flowers...the passion of the love as well..in fall...well worth falling apart over...smiles...or melting...

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    1. Hi Brian,

      Thanks for all you do ...I always enjoy reading your messages they bring a smile..Hope you enjoy the holiday weekend.

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  2. Sometimes happiness and beauty has that exact response......lovely! I am listening to Pat's "Stuck"......it is wonderful!!!!! What a creative duo you are! I love it when kindred souls find each other.

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    1. Hi Sherry,

      Thanks for visiting..I do enjoy that video Pat made that is why I brought it over to my blog to support his talent.

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  3. You captured the beauty of fall in this piece. Well done.

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    1. Thank you for visiting and your kind words.

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  4. The beauty of fall is in the contrast against other seasons. The pull is the change in colors. Great write Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. Thank you Hank..I think the fall colors are all gone here
      as we head into the cold winter weather pattern.

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  5. I had to look up the name
    to make sure the flower was the right claim
    Such a loving place to be
    Not too cold, just right at ones sea
    Where two can just be
    Living life free

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    1. Now, you know I like flowers
      so, had to do an autumn one
      as soon, they will all be gone

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  6. Truedessa, you have captured all the joyfulness of fall, and your words make me appreciate it greatly.

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    1. Always a pleasure to read your thoughts Mary...

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  7. I love all of the senses at work in this piece! :-)

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  8. Fall is my favorite time, and you've captured so much of its beauty here. The crispness, the chrysanthemums, the smells, colors and textures. Lovely~

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    1. Linda thank you for visiting and your kind words..

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  9. A beautiful sonnet for the season what's bygone. Such a lovely poetic dedication.

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    1. Thank you so much for your support...

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  10. Really a very nice autumn sonnet - love that you spoke with all senses... Very nice

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    1. Bjorn, thank you for your kind words..it seems we are heading into
      winter weather mode here.

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  11. A thick quilt of dreams..... Beautiful poem !

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  12. Lovely..with flawless rhyming. Happy Thanksgiving...no matter where you are!

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    1. Thank you so much Victoria..Happy Thanksgiving to you as well..

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  13. A very inspiring read Truedessa.>KB

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  14. I felt all of that. A beautiful sonnet that speaks to all of the senses. Lovely work.

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  15. the warmth of autumn you have caught... now on to the crispness of winter... I love forward to what you'll have to write

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    1. Hmm, I will have to write one about winter..

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