Tuesday, January 21, 2014

Lover's Moon

pic taken by me


nestled in nakedness effulgent moon
two ardent  lovers sing romantic songs
melodic lyrics heavenly hearts swoon
shimmering brightly beyond human throngs

lie with me under coverings of night
embracing warm moments,  igniting flesh
play me a song as my spirit takes flight
stroke of midnight soft notes as one we mesh

bodies sway, natural rhythm mating souls
rising passion luminous moonlit sky
pieces of my heart you quietly stole
surrendering in your arms, gentle sigh

somewhere in the heavens a shooting star
crystal rain showers tumble from afar

posted for dVerse..





60 comments:

  1. A very romantic poem here. Beautiful.

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    1. Mary, Thank you as always you are kind..

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  2. Poetically romantic. A beautiful poem.

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    1. Thank you emmett for visiting..

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  3. the moon, the music...all the elements of romance are ready to be set into play....oo la la...barry white is about to step to the mic as well...haha

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    1. Brian, that is funny..Well.."Let the Music Play" I just want to dance the night away..

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  4. Oh so romantic........has been a kazillion years since I felt like that. Such beautiful writing. Such beautiful emotions. And oh what a beautiful moon!

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    1. Sherry, thanks for the lovely words..I took that pic last week during the full moon to show a friend.

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  5. Sweet and sexy! A great combination.
    And in response to your comment - thank you! I hope you enjoy my book. (And if you do like romance, the second has a bit of that.)

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    1. Thanks Alex..

      I've decided to pick up the first book for my nook I plan to read it this weekend.

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  6. Wonderful word pictures--beautiful..

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    1. Thank you for reading..it is appreciated..

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  7. Some few of these lines evoked for me two lovely birds of the night...until it became clear--those covers!--that it was he and you, dear! How sweet!
    Smiling, I return your
    PEACE and LIGHT!

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    1. Steve,

      I like the thought of the birds..might they be love birds???

      Peace & Light right back at you...

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  8. Two as one
    Under the moon they run
    Or just sway
    As there they lay
    And play
    Until the next day

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    1. Under the moon they dream
      glowing under moonbeams..

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  9. A lovely night to be remembered with all delight.

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    1. A lovely night under starlight...

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  10. what a beautiful, lovely poem, with such a beautiful, lovely ending!

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    1. Thank you..the ending couplet is my fav..

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    1. Thank Ed..the moon just makes my head swoon..

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  12. Loved the imagery, especially- "crystal rain showers tumble from afar". I liked the beauty of the sensuality of your words... warm and it gives a good feeling.
    -HA

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    1. Thank HA I am glad you could feel the passion.

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  13. Lush and sensuous. Very satisfying and complete. Fine work.
    Steve K.

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    1. Thank you Steve so kind of you to say..

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  14. smiles...sounds like a wonderful romantic evening...

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    1. The moon has a wonderful allure about it...

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  15. carving a beautiful slice of romantic melon moon..very nice! ~jackie~

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    1. Oh, I like that thanks Jackie..

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  16. Makes one feel young! Romantically inclined and sensuously powerful. Nicely Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. Hi Hank,

      Thank you..I see you are still #1 at the cat's place..

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  17. Seductive & love filled night ~ Your sonnet is lovely ~

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    1. Thanks Grace..I do enjoy a sonnet..

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  18. Wonderful night under the moonlight!

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  19. Ahhhhh. So romantic and sensual. Pretty sexy too. You write beautifully of a beautiful night.

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  20. Romantic and sensual poem! Lovely closing couplet.

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    1. Thank you Gabriella for lovely words.

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  21. Oh with moons and swoon it's always romance love it.

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    1. Thanks Bjorn who doesn't enjoy a full moon???

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  22. Dreaming...I can see those tumbling stars...magical...

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    1. Dreaming is always nice..enjoy..

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  23. Loved it again today :D Thank you for posting on my blog :)

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