Monday, March 3, 2014

Gypsy Spirit

The Sleeping Gypsy, 1897, by Henri Rousseau


untamed
gypsy spirit
each day brings a new song
sleeping beneath the stars & moon
dreaming

posted for Magpie Tales
Mag 209

a cinquain

34 comments:

  1. Nice! Dreaming is better than being eaten.

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    1. Thanks Alex...I'm ready to read book #2

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  2. its nice to have that untamed feeling...
    and freedom , and feeling so in touch with the world...

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    1. Brian, that is so true..a sense of freedom is good for the soul...

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  3. Great job with this challenging form ....

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  4. So dreaming on the cat?
    Good then it won't leave huge scat lol
    Unless you dream that
    Then weird indeed at your mat
    Anyway, letting dreams fly free
    Is sure the way to be

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    1. Let your imagination fly
      may, your dreams touch the sky

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  5. ho ho ho great place to sleep ho ho ho

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    1. ho ho ho..beneath the stars the way to go..

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  6. Question is - dream or nightmare with a lion breathing down your neck. lol

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  7. Very nice cinquian. The briefness of this form adds weight to each word.

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    1. Mary, thank you for your kind comment.

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  8. So wonderful to have an untamed spirit...an untamed heart <3

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    1. Hi Keith,

      I think it's the way to be..thanks for visiting..

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  9. Thank you for your dream song , Contessa Truedessa ....

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    1. Thank you for hearing the song..

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    1. Interesting comment..smiling..

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    1. Thank you for the interesting prompt..always fun to try these..

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  12. We had a copy of that painting hanging in our elementary school. It's powerful! Have a good one!

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    1. Thank you..enjoy your day ..

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  13. Super succinct and open!

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  14. Nicely done to form T. I like the upbeat aspect of "each day brings a new song"...

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    1. Singing a new song with each sunrise..

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  16. It's a beautiful life you described here. :-)

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