Sunday, April 6, 2014

Within the Mirror View











Dream portal, illuminating mirror
beholding myself deep within your soul
soft reflections of you, my eyes clearer
two  images  harmoniously whole

staring into your eyes dazzling starlight
through the looking glass lies a mystery
crossing a new dimension, we take flight
etched across the heavens, our history

silvery moonbeams, two silhouettes dance
willow drums hum, behind curtains of night
as one slipping into a rhythmic trance
entwined arms & limbs a lover's delight

love shatters boundaries, beautiful view
beyond the horizon,  a glimpse of you


posted for Imaginary Garden with Real Toads writing about mirrors
sharing with Poets United.. I will be back to read as many as I
can..please be sure to do the same for your fellow poets. Have a
great day!

53 comments:

  1. What a beautiful reflection....I rarely dream when i sleep. It is with open eyes I peer through the dream portal.

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    1. Hi Susie,

      I am a deep dreamer and grateful for those magical mirrors.

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  2. A dream - especially the beautiful ones like this - that's what mirrors should be.

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    1. Hi Bjorn, a dream through a mirror of the soul..thank you for your kind words.

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  3. 'two images harmoniously whole'..love this line...

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  4. hey i like the dance you got going there...in the third stanza...and if anything can overcome the boundaries, love can...that is for sure...

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    1. Ah, the dance of all dances..magical in so many ways..hope you are enjoying your weekend.

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  5. Love does indeed break all boundaries. Very nice!

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    1. Hi Alex,

      Thanks for taking the time to visit as I know you are busy with the A to Z challenge.

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    2. And thank you for your gracious comment on my post. I'm glad you like my theme and hope it continues to entertain you. I can't rhyme. All I can do is amuse...

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  6. What a beautiful sonnet on love ~ I specially like the third stanza on silvery moonbeams ~ Ending couplet is romantic & passionate ~

    Thanks for linking up with Real Toads ~ Wishing you Happy Weekend ~

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    1. Thank you Grace for the interesting prompt as it was inspiring..

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  7. Seeing two in one can be as bright as the sun, the boundaries can break and new paths two can make, just have to open and see, great love one write done by thee.

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    1. Hi Pat,

      Thank you as always for all your inspiration..see you soon aboard our ship to bora bora bay..smiling today..

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  8. Lovely sonnet Trudessa.

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  9. Love knows no bounds! It transcends barriers and boundaries. The image of a loved one is always seen in the distance! Great write Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. Hi Hank,

      Thanks for visiting..I see you are still number one at the cat's bay. I hope you have a wonderful day...

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  10. What a beautiful dream you have evoked in your sonnet, Trudessa! "beholding myself deep within your soul" - my favourite line.

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    1. Thank you Gabriella, I too like that line..

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  11. The culmination of the dream with the glimpse of lover...:-)

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    1. Hello,

      Thank you for reading..

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  12. it is amazing when you see the world with two sets of eyes,two souls and two hearts...it opens things that you never saw before...

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    1. Hi Robert,

      That is so true..very insightful of you..

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  13. This was so ethereal and light...just beautiful, Truedessa.

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    1. Thank you Talon it was a poem I felt deep inside..

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    1. Hi Gloria,

      Thanks for visiting..I just love the food over at your site..especially the blueberry ones..

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    1. How kind of you for visiting..

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    1. so kind of you for saying so...

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  17. Beautiful, and your closing lines are especially lovely.....

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    1. Thank you my friend..I hope you are enjoying your weekend..

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  18. This poem really gives me a dreamy surreal feeling. Very nice.

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  19. Very good work with the rhyme. I wish I were a more sophisticated rhymer.

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    1. Thanks for your kind comment and visit.

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  20. Lots of great mysterious imagery :)

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  21. I really truly love this. Love shatters all boundaries indeed doesn't it?

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    1. Hi Keith,

      Thanks for coming over for a visit so glad you enjoyed my poem.

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  22. Gorgeous and so many wondrous lines! I love your poem~

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  23. beyond the "horizon"… a glimpse of you. Nice!

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