Wednesday, May 14, 2014

Suspended in Time

image by Martin Stranka

















suspended  in  stillness   deep   thoughts  of you
the  only   sound  echoes of my  heart beat
drifting   between  realms a  world   for  two
flickering  memories  swift   rush  of  heat 

twilight hovers beyond curtains of  night 
during   blue  hour, dreams  fill  an  orange  sky
celestial  heaven bursting gold starlight
to   truly   see  beauty  open  your eyes

branded  with longing  warm  fire  of  desire 
come   join  me  under  the  radiant  moon
tonight  let  us dance  upon  the  high   wire 
our  bodies  sway   to  their  own   special   tune 

whispering secrets  into   waiting  ears
magical  words   that   only  we  can   hear 

posted for the Mag219

25 comments:

  1. Those magic words can cause me to stray, into the gutter I just may play lol plus the moon brings out the loon, or so they say, perfect capture at your bay. And didn't even need itchy hay haha

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    1. Well it is a full moon
      so tonight I might swoon haha
      and look you are number one
      under my sun..

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    2. I guess the full moon makes me act like Hank, #1 lol

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    3. haha, Hank was on a #1 streak at your show until Keith slipped in there one morning and claimed #1. Now, Hank is starting over..:)

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  2. I love your creation for this challenge. I was with out words for this. You handled the challenge well enough for the two of us.

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    1. Hi Gail,

      Thank you for your kind words and know I have a craving for dandelions and vinegar.

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  3. SO beautiful - it was a SPECTACULAR moon last night, with orange haze......I howled alone, hee hee. I especially love "to truly see beauty open your eyes". YES!

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    1. Hi Sherry, the moon was spectacular..I am sure there were others out there howling with you..hee hee..hope you are feeling well my friend.

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  4. Love is the elixir for this soul!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    1. beautifully said..thank you for the visit..

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  5. Very sexy flow to your words.
    And bummer, I missed the moon last night.

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    1. Good Morning Alex,

      I always take a moment to gaze upon the full moon so beautiful as it lights the night sky. Maybe, you can catch a glimpse tonight.

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  6. Truedessa I can sense some true love in these words. This is filled with beautiful sensuality and romanticism. An awesome combination. Very emotive. Great work!

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    1. Hi Keith,

      Thank you so much for your kind words.

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  7. what a beautiful invitation to dance and be together under the light of the moon....and whisper words only you understand...deliciously intimate...

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    1. Brian,

      Thanks so much for your support..I always enjoy reading your responses.

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  8. I like the sensuality in this, the beauty of the words connecting love and nature, lovers communicating their own language.

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    1. Myrna, thank you so much for your comment. I always appreciate your visits.

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  9. I like the notion of night having curtains...lovely...

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    1. Thanks Tess, I really enjoy these prompts of yours..

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  10. I've read your poem several times now. The sound of it touches me deeply. I love the moon. I've always loved sharing my stories with it. Sharing those special moments under the moon light with my loved one is one of the most amazing experiences and you captured it perfectly.

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    1. Beate,

      Thank you for such a heartfelt comment. I am glad I could capture a moment.

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  11. Beautiful. Just beautiful.

    New follower.

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    1. Thank you Wendy for visiting and following.

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  12. Such a beautiful write... tantalisingly romantic! Loved it, lots!

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