Tuesday, July 22, 2014

Lost in a Moment


hourglass
passage of  time 
your  arms  wrapped  around   mine 
 lost  in the  moment  we  collapse 
 freedom
dreaming
 time  is  always   now 
transcending dimensions
in a burst of  light  colliding
we fuse


posted for dVerse hosted by Mary writing about time..

50 comments:

  1. time is always now - love that! K

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    1. Time is indeed now..thanks

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  2. Love does transcend time and all dimensions, I think. Lovely poem!

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    1. Hi Jeff, love and dreams can transcend time..I believe that to be true..

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  3. Dreaming time is always now....I like this idea. We have to appreciate those dreams when we can as long as we can!

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    1. I agree Mary, dreams are the keys to living now..thanks for the prompt.

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  4. Time is always now, I love that ~

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    1. No better time than the here and now..

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  5. Great use of the shape, Truedessa! You have captured that precious moment perfectly.

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    1. Thanks Gabriella..hold on to the moments

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  6. Such a fusion is what all strive for, and all sure hope for an encore. Lost in that one moment makes all worthwhile. A great tune too.

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    1. I agree lost in that one moment
      of complete happiness makes
      the journey worthwhile step by step

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  7. that's the best way of getting lost...in the moment with a loved one...nice

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    1. Lost in the moments of life can be a good thing...hope you are having a good week.

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  8. I like that precious moment transcending time....

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  9. A very sensuous way to respond to this prompt. All we need is a loving moment to transcend time, to collapse into freedom, dreaming. This is lovely.

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    1. Hi Myrna

      Thanks for reading..I guess I am just a romantic..

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  10. In some moments we need to be lost.

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    1. That is true some moments are meant to be lost in..

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  11. I like the artistic flourish in the presentation of the poem!

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  12. Those are some wonderful moments to get lost in, aren't they?

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    1. I agree I hope you experience moment like these with your special lady..

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  13. This poem brings to mind every time I hug/hold my wife. I am "Lost In A Moment" for every hug we have. And they are beautiful moments, just like this poem beautiful because it evokes memories like that.

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    1. Enjoy those moments they are special..hug each day ..

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  14. The freedom of getting lost in a moment! A lovely take on the prompt!

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    1. Thank you freedom is a good feeling

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  15. Oh, so fluid and beautiful!

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    1. You are so kind to say so.. Thank you

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  16. You live in the golden time of love. May it last forever, my friend.

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  17. I love how you replicated the shape of an hourglass for this, Truedessa, and the image of the arms wrapped around us.

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    1. Thank you Victoria may we all know special moments in time

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  18. So true, dreams do transcend all dimensions. I like the idea of becoming lost in time with a lover too...ah...yes. And love that great Cyndi Lauper song!

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    1. I do enjoy a good dream and the video conveys so much..thanks for visiting

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  19. I loved the third and fourth lines Trudessa, that concept of holding a beautiful moment forever. So nicely done.

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  20. the first part presents me with a very interesting visual of me and sand passing through an hourglass. we often forget time is now...to focused on what is to come. an enjoyable read.

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  21. Very cool....love C. L. anytime!

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  22. i love how you float here...very vivid!

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    1. Floating can be fun.. Thank you

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  23. The hour glass… I have a few on my desk - they fascinate me - I often turn them before they run out - but life isn't like that, is it?

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    1. That is interesting that you have hourglasses on your desk. I think it would be fun to ponder as the sand gently flows.

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  24. love that first bit on the hourglass...and the arm in arm how we at times can transcend those notions we have of time.....

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    1. Transcending time can be a wonderful thing..

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  25. Time isn't a rock,
    A grain of sand... It's us.

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