Sunday, August 24, 2014

Beyond the Landscape

Starry Night by Alex Ruiz















Under a starry sky he takes in the view
capturing moments indescribable night
palette of colors ready  in various hues
releasing tension, into  the dancing light

her sweet scent lingers in the meadow
a wildflower,  that sings her own song
painting her beauty, a soulful falsetto
together they create magic and belong

twinkling bright , distant  heaven above
diamond teardrops, falling from the sky
inspiring his muse,  soft  brushes of love
she is out there waiting,  his heart sighs

beyond the landscape,  sweet dreams
stroked on a canvas, words unspoken
here he creates art under moonbeams
may this magical spell never be broken

posted for the prompt Magpie Tales #234
sharing with Poets United

29 comments:

  1. A spell to last for all time, as only two can paint such an image, trick is for the two to be found and in each other for them to surround.

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  2. That had such a wonderful flow, Truedsessa.

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  3. This has a dream like rhythm much like that ending line:

    may this magical spell never be broken

    Good one Truedessa ~ Have a good week ~

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  4. ah you have created a beautiful link between the two...and i love that the meadow carries her scent...she is so there...and so i can see where his inspiration and the magic comes from...smiles.

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  5. Alex is right: this has such a wonderful texture and flowing imagery. :-)

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  6. Beautiful. Just beautiful!

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  7. LOVE aroma of meadow, wildflower, and...she!
    Written SO well!

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  8. "beyond the landscape, sweet dreams"...the line works wonder and the magic spell is everlasting...an amazing write

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  9. A sensitive take, soft and dreamy and magical, as is the picture.

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  10. The beautiful dream world:)

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  11. I love these alchemical lovers ...thanks True'

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  12. Using the beauty of the night sky as inspiration for his art...what an amazing poem :-)

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  13. What a lovely poem you have written, Truedessa! Oh that we all had such a magical experience.

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  14. Your words are a beautiful poetic illustration of the photo. I like the image of the 'diamond teardrops'.

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  15. may this magical spell never be broken

    If only such dreams can be sustained. It may when two persons share the same dreams. Nicely Truedessa!

    Hank

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  16. Soft brushes of love... I like that. And I like you.
    But that you already knew. ;)

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  17. I could not think of a better way to describe true romance, that of the heart - in deepest harmony with the moonbeams and stars-

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  18. I loved this 'magical spell' ! :)x

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  19. A magical write Truedessa. :-)

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  20. I feel that magical spell working its magic already!

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  21. I LOVE "a wildflower that sings her own song"......

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  22. The photo IS magical, which makes your poem the best kind of response to it.

    =)

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  23. Sweet:)) The words intertwine with the picture beautifully!

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  24. Grand, splendid and quite well-done...

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  25. I enjoyed this. thanks for posting.

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  26. So good....thanks for sharing your words

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  27. Magical and beautiful Truedessa:)

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  28. I agree, this is magical. Wonderful journey. Love and Light, S

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