Sunday, September 14, 2014

Caught in Autumn's Mist













softly whispering through warm autumn mist
pearl colored clouds slowly drift overhead
two souls touching, world ceases to exist
lying in leaves of splendor crimson red

catching their breath beneath colorful hues
scent of fall filling lungs, gasping for air
tangled limbs, desires climbing skies of blue
brushing parted lips, wondrous kiss they share

uncloaked beauty, caught in passionate light
journey filled with twists following their dreams
seeking solace, wandering hearts take flight
caught in rapture, releasing silent screams

finding peace in the stillness of their love
under a gold crown heaven shines above

posted for Poets Untied 
the leaves around here are starting to change
an early fall perhaps, as summer days fade.. 
Thank you for reading and I will be around
later to read all your wonderful poetry..

34 comments:

  1. Such a lovely sonnet, capturing the passionate light of the two souls ~ Happy autumn weekend to you ~

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Grace and Happy Sunday to you!

      Delete
  2. an autumn delight...love the sensuous imagery all through...beautiful :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you ..hard to believe Autumn colors are already showing..

      Delete
  3. The changes of autumn captured in such preciseness - let us enjoy the change and look out for that bite.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Bjorn,

      Autumn a time of change once again..I will miss the long summer days..

      Delete
  4. Two as one making their own heat as fall umm falls lol does seem to be coming a bit early this year indeed, hopefully that doesn't mean the same for winter.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Well, let's hope winter doesn't show too early as that is one season
      I am not fond of as it brings snow, ice and cold wind.

      Delete
  5. Wow, a sonnet! I am amazed at your poetic superpowers. A very autumn poem.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you so glad you enjoyed my sonnet..

      Delete
  6. oh, this is... brings tears to the eye. just lovely.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you for the lovely comment...

      Delete
  7. Wow. Everything is making love! The clouds are so beautiful at it, and there go teh branches and the couple underneath. That warm autumn mist is a lot like spring fever.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Susan,

      Autumn brings vibrant colors much like spring both a time of change..who wouldn't want to get lost in the moment.

      Delete
  8. Lovely! When two souls are touching, very little is important except the experience of the beautiful moment.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Mary,

      Lost under a canopy of orange and yellow gold..

      Delete
  9. Romantic, sensuous and beautiful. The seasons do seem to make love as they tangle one day warm, the other cold, 'til they find the proper temperature, as lovers do. Beautiful write.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank Myrna..always a pleasure to read your comments..Hope you are enjoying your day..

      Delete
  10. This is lovely! We are not there yet though I would love to be--continued warm and dry=

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I enjoy the warmer months but, fall does hold some beautiful
      colors so vibrant..

      Delete
  11. Beautiful! I love autumn!! xo

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Gloria my dear baker friend..nice to have you visit..

      Delete
  12. Captured the true essence of both autumn and love here - they are meant to be intertwined :-)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Autumn seems to be arriving rather quickly here ..where did summer go???

      Delete
  13. I wish my fall was this beautiful. Mine is less gasping and kisses and more raking leaves in the cold.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Well, no raking around here yet the leaves are just starting to
      turn colors but, the air is getting that crisp feeling..

      Delete
  14. Quite a romantic tryst you created here.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. I blame it on the autumn colors so vibrant it makes the mind wander..

      Delete
  15. Humble apologies for my lengthy delay in actually visiting your poetic site. You have encapsulated the ambience of the resplendent colours of autumn, of love. Thank you.

    Gary :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Welcome my friend no apology needed here..I am just glad to see
      you again..I hope you are settling in..

      Delete
  16. smiles.. usually everyone talks about the magic of being in love in spring... but in autumn it is probably even more magical

    ReplyDelete
  17. As beautiful as the fall colors themselves!

    ReplyDelete