Thursday, October 16, 2014

Dragon



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dreams of a dragon's song
dancing in the  
night  sky
diamonds  
gleam above 
duet song of two hearts
doors  
open distant  realm
deeper in  
tune  we sing
discovering beauty



Writing Pleiades at dVerse
hosted by Vandana Sharma

66 comments:

  1. A beautiful dream a beautiful poem, and a beautiful photo at the top. This is lovely Truedessa. :-)

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  2. Truedessa, if you only knew how much that touches on my next story...

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    1. Alex,

      Perhaps, some synchronicity came into play..I look forward to reading your next story.

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  3. Very mystical, and absolutely dream like...

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    1. Dragons are mystical as they soar the heavens..

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  4. What a beautiful duet of a dragon song ~ Lovely response to the prompt Truedessa ~

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    1. Thanks Grace, this was an interesting form.

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  5. A lovely ethereal, cosmic tone to this, very nice.

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    1. Thank you for visiting and leaving a comment. Have a great evening.

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  6. i like the concept of dragon song.

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  7. hey i would love to hear a dragon's song...
    it adds another level of magic to this...
    sing on to that duet...smiles.

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    1. A Dragon's Song..a work in progress..

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  8. Doors to a distant realm are sure nice ones to push open, awesome pic too. let the dragon sing

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    1. Push the doors open one never knows what will appear..

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  9. What a magical poem you have created here, Truedessa. Lovely imagery.

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  10. Dreams take us to places beyond our imaginations.

    Lee
    Tossing It Out

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    1. Dreams do indeed take us to those special places..thanks for visiting.

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  11. big dragon fan here, so I'd love to hear the song. But maybe the dragon's song is the challenges we face in life.

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    1. The Dragon's song could be about overcoming challenges..

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  12. Ethereal, lovely verse, Truedessa.

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  13. The first poem using letter 'd'...and I love its singing voice.

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    1. The first one isn't a bad thing..D for daring I guess..

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  14. Oh this is beautiful, and the image you chose is really cool, too.

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    1. Hi Sherry,

      Thanks so much my friend..

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  15. Dreaming of a dragon's song. Love they words and how they combine into a story.

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    1. Dreaming of a dragon's song..I am sure the dragon has a story to tell.

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  16. duet song of two hearts under the diamond-gleam Is the dream stuff...beautiful Trudessa...

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    1. Could be what dreams are made of?

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  17. loved the dragon duet..it's just wonderful

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  18. The song of a dragon heart portrayed beautifully. Thank you so much.

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    1. Thank you for hosting. I enjoyed the prompt :)

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  19. Oh, I would certainly sing having seen this hint of a dragon. A lovely song.

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    1. Thank you Susan..a sight to behold I am sure...

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  20. "d's" worked well here... gave it a strong feel

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  21. There's something so ancient and mystical about dragons. Your words have captured the magic!

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    1. Dragons are mystical and magical to capture a small bit is amazing..

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  22. You had me at "dragon song!"

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    1. Well, I am glad you came over to read..Thanks..

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    1. Thank you..it sets the tone..

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  24. You combined a common emotion, love, with mysterious creatures and it's worded nicely. Well done.

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    1. Thanks for visiting Justin and welcome..

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  25. dreams of a dragon's song
    dancing in the night sky
    diamonds gleam above

    Amazingly movements in the sky can evoke great pictures in the minds Wonderful wrire Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. Hi Hank,

      Thanks for stopping by..

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  26. So nice about dreams! Sounds like beginning of the fairy tale. Love the title, the hint of two hearts...

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  27. This is so concise yet rich with beauty.
    Very nice, Truedessa.

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    1. Hi Robyn,

      This was a writing challenge at dVerse we were asked to write a 7 line poem with a one word title. Each of the seven lines had to start with the first letter of the title and each line had to be six syllables. So, concise it had to be..thanks for visiting nice to see you here :)

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  28. Groovy piece. Love the last two lines.

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    1. Thanks for visiting and leaving a note..

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  29. This is enchanting. Well done. :-)

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  30. Wow, you really got some great responses with this one; thanks for stopping by my site; your pleaides truly sings; nice take on the prompt.

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    1. Hi Glenn,

      Thanks for coming over for a visit. I always enjoy reading your work especially love those stories.

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  31. I love the use of alliteration. Really enhances the beauty of an already mesmerizing poem.

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    1. Thanks guys, still laughing over the "Great Post" comment..we need one of those shirts.

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  32. Mysterious like you.

    But am I the only one whose afraid of dragons?

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    1. Mysterious who me?

      Well, some dragons can be scary depends on how you view them. It's about perception.

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