Saturday, October 4, 2014

Thinking of You in an Autumn Mist

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In an autumn mist I think of you
two souls yearning for life's kiss
in a wild forest our hearts grew
in an autumn mist I think of you
finding our way dreams in view
transcending time heavenly bliss
in an autumn mist I think of you
two souls yearning for life's kiss

posting for Poets United
Autumn colors are bursting here..


52 comments:

  1. Interesting pic indeed, had to do a double take to see the person. Two as one as the yearning makes them come undone.

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    1. Interesting pic indeed, I saw that and thought of two..

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  2. Life's kiss - sounds new and intriguing....xx

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    1. A new season..new thoughts and sounds..

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  3. 'two sounds yearning for life's kiss' -- a lovely thought, Truedessa.

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    1. Two souls yearning for life's kiss..Thanks Mary...

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  4. I like the refrain too: two souls yearning for life's kiss ~ Romantic autumn thoughts ~

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    1. Thank you Grace I hope you enjoy your Sunday.

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  5. Yes, I love the repetition, too ~ such a sweet & romantic Autumn poem ~ smiles :)

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  6. As always loved this one too:) is this any poetic form, for I love its flow and rhythm

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    1. Thank you..I learned this form over at dVerse Mary and Bjorn have done a few that I have enjoyed. I tried it with "and Then the Rain Came as well.

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  7. autumn and a wild forest and the yearning for love and life's kiss... i get this...smiles

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    1. thanks Claudia, who doesn't enjoy a wild forest of dreams.

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  8. Oh yes .. Such a great theme for a triolet.. And the importance of that kiss...

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    1. Thank Bjorn, I've always enjoyed your triolets so thought I would give it a go as it re-enforces the message.

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  9. I love "two souls yearning for life's kiss."

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    1. Hi Sherry, we all have a yearning for something in life..

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  10. an autumn mist reminds me of tears and the yearning makes it all the more poignant...however there are dreams in view and assurance of heavenly bliss. ....wonderful Truedessa....

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    1. Thank you..don't we all want a bit of bliss in life?

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  11. I like the movement you've given in this: for me it's about lingering innocence and the discovery of love, perhaps seen in the rear view mirror. Interesting ideas and execution. Nice job.
    Steve K.

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  12. everyone is writing about autumn and i love it! such a pretty poem you have weaved!

    stacy lynn mar
    http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/2014/10/saturday-prompt-2-starry-skies-and.html

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    1. Thank you Stacy I think the change in season allows for some great poetry.

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  13. the repetition works well in this...autumn is a time of reflection for many...and yearning...as all goes to sleep until spring....

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    1. Hi Brian,

      A time of reflection in an autumn mist..that is true as nature prepares to go into hibernation for the long winter months.

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  14. It is very important to find someone to keep you warm in winter so autumn is your last chance!

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    1. I believe there is always a chance for warmth no matter the season thanks for visiting. It is appreciated.

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  15. I love the use of repetition. Also, I love the use of repetition. (Little joke) Very nicely done.

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    1. Thank you, thank you repetition is always nice..smiling..

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  16. Ah life's kiss....such a beautiful image that evokes Truedessa. This is lovely!

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  17. The picture and the poem go together beautifully. I love the autumn romance.

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    1. Hi Myrna thank you for your kindness..

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  18. I'm not a fan of autumn except for... the smell. That I love, and a lot too. So, how are you?

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    1. Ah Blue, the other day the air had that crisp autumn smell and it made me pause to savor the scent. I have to say I do not like what comes after fall the dreaded winter and snow. I am getting through the days thanks for asking.

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    2. Winter... let's skip it. Where should we go?

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    3. lol..let's go somewhere warm..How about Key West?

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  19. Aren't we all just searching for another to share with? Maybe not but still a great poem.

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    1. Smiling, thanks for visiting..

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  20. This is sweet and needs to be made a song.

    I'm your newest follower thanks to your masterful verses at Rhyme Time.

    Cheers.

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    1. HI Robyn,

      Thanks for visiting! I am glad you enjoyed the poem over at Rhyme Time it was fun to do the banter with the cat and of course Pat..

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  21. Beautiful poem. Glad to meet you at Alex's earlier this week.

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    1. Hi Carol,

      Thanks for the visit..I will have to check out your book.

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