Sunday, November 9, 2014

Chasing Dreams in a Drifting Sea

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I want to feel the sun
but, all I see are clouds
I wonder where the journey goes
I wonder where it ends
I am but a vessel in a drifting sea
chasing rainbows in the land of make believe

loving you with a full heart
it's the only way I  know
letting my emotions flow
I can't let your go

I want to feel the sun
but, all I feel is rain
I wonder where the journey goes
I wonder where it ends
I am but a vessel in a drifting  sea
chasing rainbows in a land of make believe

Loving you seems easy
some may call me a fool
the world can be cruel
Sometimes we need to break the rules

I want to feel the sun
but, all I see are clouds
I wonder where the journey goes
I wonder where it ends
I am but a vessel in a drifting sea
chasing rainbows in a land of make believe

crystal visions before my eyes
believing we are kindred souls
your words make me whole
for that  dream I gladly pay the toll

I want to feel the sun
but, all I feel is rain
I wonder where the journey goes
I wonder where it ends
I  am but a vessel in  a drifting sea
chasing rainbows in a land of make believe

Loving you with a full heart
I need you to know
 I can't let you go
to you my heart I bestow

Note: Sharing with Poets United ~ I am not sure if everyone can see the video so I posted the poem as well. They are two slightly different versions as I couldn't decide which one I liked better. All pictures are my own except the blue rose as that artist is unknown.  Thank you for visiting.

36 comments:

  1. I enjoyed the video and your photos are beautiful! Oh, what love does to us you have so perfectly expressed, Truedessa!

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    1. Thank you Talon and yes Love does seem to do a number to us.

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  2. I love the imagery of a vessel in a drifting sea, chasing rainbows in a land of make believe....very vivid and powerful.

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  3. I couldn't see the video.. But I very much enjoyed you gospel.. Strong with imagery.. A very strong read.

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    1. I am not sure if it is a gospel but, it does have that sort of feel.

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  4. Thank you for sharing your deep feelings with us.


    ALOHA from Honolulu
    ComfortSpiral
    =^..^= . <3 . >< } } (°>

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    1. Thank you for reading my thoughts..

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  5. A nice unfolding of deep faith and devotion...beautiful Truedessa...

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  6. The video was a great idea. I liked the images with the words. Those words flow like a song.

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    1. Thanks Alex, I tried a bit of experimenting..I agree it does flow like a song.

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  7. A lovely presentation, Truedessa. Some wonderful lines, and it would be nice to hear it sung! No sun here this morning, so I could really get into your thoughts! Smiles.

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    1. Hi Mary, those cloudy days like to linger for a bit, but I guess it makes the sun feel twice as nice.

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  8. Great video addition indeed, awesome idea as the images ring true with the words all the more. Put to music could really be a hit song too.

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    1. Hi Pat,

      Maybe, next time some music will come into play.

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  9. Sweet! (for some reason I had no sound from the video, but it didn't deter from its wonderful lines and creativity)
    ZQ

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    1. Hi,

      There is no sound on this one I just created a picture show for my words. So glad you enjoyed anyway ;)

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  10. i loved the rhythm and rhyme of this lovely poem. and yes, how you structured it too.

    thanks for sharing the video, but i cannot hear the audio too. maybe i don't have that audio codec installed in my pc. :)

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    1. Hi,

      Thanks for visiting your computer is fine there is no audio on this one. A silent picture show today.

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  11. Lovly song...Wish, I could hear you reading......nice images x

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    1. Hmm..maybe, I can do a reading soon.

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  12. I can see the video just fine. Those images went great went with the poem. Very well done. I know the feeling of wanting to feel the sun and only getting rain.

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    1. Thanks glad you could see the video as I wasn't sure how that would work out. Well, I guess a little rain has to fall in the journey of life :)

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  13. Very beautiful writing, Truedessa :) I enjoyed your pictures very much, too!

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  14. I enjoyed the video and the poem Truedessa ~ Such an earnest plea for love, who knows where the journey will bring us ~

    Thanks for sharing ~

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    1. The journey goes where it goes I guess..thanks for visiting..

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  15. They are not very different but I slightly prefer the version not in the video - though the video is beautiful to watch.

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    1. Hi Rosemary,

      Thanks for the input they have a slightly different feel.

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  16. Thanks for sharing both the video and your poem.

    www.modernworld4.blogspot.com

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  17. This is beautiful, my friend. It's always a love story in here and in this old world that is a good thing:)!

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    1. Thanks Sherry, What can I say I am a hopeless romantic..

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  18. Your word really resonate with me. I want to feel the sun. :)

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  19. I like the idea of adding the video. Went perfectly with the beautiful words :)

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