Monday, December 1, 2014

Unraveling towards Unity

Bond of Union, 1956, by M. C. Escher 


two souls
 unraveling 
 cohesive in their thoughts 
 ribbons of her entwined with him
they bond
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two spheres
facing  inward 
in a  vast  universe
 revolving around each other 
meshing

posted for Magpie Tales 248

34 comments:

  1. Two unraveling the one and re-raveling as two is sure the way to go at ones zoo

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    1. Unraveling so they can become one in mind, body and spirit..

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  2. Sounds like two people in love...

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  3. Very accurate description of love. Well done.

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    1. Hi Gail,

      Thanks for visiting. Nice to hear from you.

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  4. Expressive words for the theme!

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  5. Souls unraveling, a beautiful reaction to the prompt...

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    1. Berowne, thanks for visiting. I found your quiz interesting and decided to take a guess. I hope I am not too far from the shore.

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  6. LOVE this description of the uniting of two souls :) it's beautiful, Truedessa!

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    1. Thanks Keith, How many more days till Christmas? I know you enjoy this time of year.

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  7. Perhaps one must allow oneself to be taken apart to a degree in order to fully bond with another. A lovely piece!
    http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/12/one-soul-as-two-minds.html

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    1. Thank you I guess it is something to consider..

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  8. Two heads loving it! It cannot be any better. How they both jive with just ribbons! Great write Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. Hi Hank,

      Thanks two spheres revolving and evolving..

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  9. in the unwinding perhaps they can rewind together....
    each separate, but more together...

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    1. Hi Brian,

      That is true perhaps the bond would be stronger..

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  10. Excellent writing!!! True love explained:))

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  11. Falling apart to come together. Nice!

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    1. Thanks..sometimes we have to fall apart..

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    1. Brings visions of happiness somewhere in the vast universe.

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  13. I like the idea of unraveling into unity.....

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    1. Hi Sherry,

      I think sometimes we have to unravel a bit in life.

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  14. I love the idea of two souls bonding and twining in the vast universe ~ Hope you are well ~

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    1. Hi Grace,

      Haven't seen you around in a while. Hope all is well.

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  15. Unraveling/meshing: I like the interplay of the opposites.

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    1. Welcome and thanks for the visit.

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  16. Its such a gift in a spiritual sense , so much better than being alone , but if you confuse the planes and it is a material projection rather than an inner sense ....i believe they call it the pool that is Facebook

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    1. Hi, Thanks for the visit. I have to say I have never been a part of the Facebook crowd. Call me an oddball.

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  17. Sounds like a good marriage getting better. The world could use a few more of those.

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  18. You poem rings like the way love should be.....

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