Tuesday, January 20, 2015

The Moon is Out Tonight











The moon is  out  tonight, lighting the  way 
let  us  set  sail  upon   our  ship  of dreams
let 's dance  until  the moon fades  away 
casting our  net ,  under   golden  moonbeams

captain  at  the  helm , he has  weathered  storms
together  they  have  rode the waves of  change 
chasing darkness, light  swarms in many  forms
entering  portals, their lives  interchange 

 let  us sink  into the depth of  desire 
 floating freely , under  a million stars
 our  eyes glowing, quenching our inner  fire 
 lost in a raging sea, we heal our  scars

searching our souls, for  those  hidden treasures 
sighing under the moon finding  pleasures


posted for dVerse hosted by Mary writing
to photography by Totomai

I will be around off and on to read as I am
not feeling well. Thanks for reading. 

28 comments:

  1. well his photos played right into you, now didnt they....smiles...
    first, there is something def romantic about riding the waves on a pirate ship or an ocean going vessel...def a wonderful place to be with the one you love...

    ReplyDelete
  2. ..am watching Obama's address and see a parallel here as to the direction our country is going, but without that, this is a lovely poem for a romantic.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Love the idea of searching souls for those hidden treasures! They definitely are there if we look. Do feel better, Truedessa.

    ReplyDelete
  4. I love the sonnet ~ So romantic to be out on an adventure until the moon fades away ~ I hope you are feeling better ~

    ReplyDelete
  5. such a sweet and tender write... sinking into the depths of desire with that special someone... sigh. Feel better, Truedessa :))

    ReplyDelete
  6. i want to join the adventure but i am afraid of the big waves haha.
    hope you will feel better soon.

    ReplyDelete
  7. Stunning play on the moon. Feel better, Truedessa.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Wonderful treasures & pleasures :)
    Nice words, Truedessa!

    ReplyDelete
  9. I like the way your poem echoes others you have written as well as the adventurous tone of your words.

    ReplyDelete
  10. Well, I actually thought of Titanic especially with the phrases "The ship of dreams" and "let us sink into the depth of desire
    floating freely , under a million stars"

    Lovely enchanting play of words.

    ReplyDelete
  11. Waves & Moon, a perfect combo to a romantic sail & adventure... the two are just engaging & too affecting for one not to feel the moment.. Always a pleasure to read your tails in poetry form plus with the added delight coming from your almost perfect (if not) rhymes.. Get well soon, my friend! Smiles.

    - ksm

    ReplyDelete
  12. It is so reassuring when the moon is out together accompanying us beaming the darken skies. Wishing you speedy recovery Truedessa! Lovely write!

    Hank

    ReplyDelete
  13. Soul searching and finding pleasure sound good. Your poem is a gentle, yet a passionate dance in the moonlit night.
    -HA

    ReplyDelete
  14. Sorry you don't feel well!
    Sounds like a rare good adventure of Captain Pat and Truedessa.

    ReplyDelete
  15. I thought of the Titanic, and then I noticed that Prajakta thought of the same thing :)

    ReplyDelete
  16. Floating freely with no ties that bind, enjoying the sea would sure be the way to me as the moon shines bright. Hopefully the germs hit the road soon.

    ReplyDelete
  17. Oh what a beautiful sonnet.. and the ship and captain is right there with you and the moon...

    ReplyDelete
  18. Quite an invitation to the night and to the reader. Luscious.

    ReplyDelete
  19. So clever how you find yourself, your constant clear voice, within that stunning image; nice take on it. Thanks for your lovely comment over at my site; seems we are both the adventurous types, & let that malaise, virus, or dark place move on, or through you, & regain the magic of your smile.

    ReplyDelete
  20. This is so romantic and sensual. How can you write so beautifully when you're not even feeling well?
    Hope you get better soon.

    ReplyDelete
  21. excuse me - i have to leave - i wanna be a pirate now... ha - something so dangerously adventurous and romantic to this

    ReplyDelete
  22. feel better soon!

    we are made for adventures :)

    ReplyDelete
  23. a good vogue of adventure here... proves a writer can go anywhere

    ReplyDelete
  24. Wow, Totomai has actually photographed your ship of dreams. How cool. (Too bad he didnt get one of the elusive Truedessa, LOL.) A beautiful poem and I hope you are soon feeling better, my friend.

    ReplyDelete
  25. Very pretty flow to this...hope you're feeling better soon. :)

    ReplyDelete
  26. Lovely complement between photo and words. :-)

    ReplyDelete
  27. I've always been fascinated by the moon and I love the ocean. Your poem is very beautifully capturing both.
    I hope you will feel better very soon!

    ReplyDelete
  28. Thank you all for your lovely comments and well wishes for my recovery. It means so much to me to know people care.

    Love and light always my friends!

    ReplyDelete