Thursday, March 19, 2015

Sacred Fire - Burning Desire













spring  arrives  with  altering  tides
  moon's shadow  falls  across  the  earth 
    on  a  ship  of dreams my  heart  rides
      new  awareness,  swiftly  gives birth

golden  sunlight,  hot  sacred  fire 
  peaceful moments,  embracing   light 
   love  a  spark  , igniting  desire 
    thoughts of  you  flicker in the  night 

darkness hovers, solar  eclipse 
  reflections, eternal  heartbeat
   signaling  change  , splendid tulips
     beneath bluest skies, two souls  meet 

inhaling a  fresh  breath of  spring 
  oh, sunlight  what  song  will  you  bring 



posted for Poets United writing about the sun
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46 comments:

  1. "oh sunlight, what song will you bring?" I love that question. Beautifully written, my friend.

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    1. Good Morning Sherry and happy spring..thanks for all you do over at Poets United. Enjoyed the prompt.

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  2. Your ending is wonderful!

    ALOHA from Honolulu
    ComfortSpiral
    =^..^=

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  3. ah! such a beautiful poem as always and i see here a new perspective on the sun!!

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    1. The sun takes on a new view as spring arrives may it be filled with colorful moments.

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  4. Beautiful as always. Great use of rhyme, it really made the poem strong.

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    1. Thank you for visiting and leaving your kind words :)

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  5. Perfect poem for the first day of spring!

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    1. Hi Alex,

      Well, it is not a perfect day here, it once again snowing :(

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  6. love me a cheerful sunlight song... and spring is def. the time of the year to fall in love with...smiles

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    1. Spring so much renewal in the air and over the land.

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  7. Sun and spring, much hope they can bring

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    1. That is true..shall we sing about spring?

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  8. Oh yes, the sun will for sure bring a song, which will make the heart go ga ga.

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    1. haha - have to watch that heart as it does a flip flop...

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  9. This resonates with passion and hopeful desire...so lovely!

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    1. thank Hannah..we all need hope...

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  10. Wonderful poem! So inspired...!!

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  11. Hi there, Ms Truedessa...

    How is everything?!?

    :-)

    ~shoes~

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    1. Hi Shoes,

      Nice to see you here...I am not feeling too good tonight..thanks for stopping in for a visit. I wonder if I would see the Thunderbird if I went there?

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  12. what a way to welcome spring - solar eclipse! great song of spring :)

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    1. thanks, I could use a nice song about now...Happy Spring :-)

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  13. It feels right to listen our heart...and anticipate the changes....they say....now we will complete the task started in 90s.....wish you a happy spring song, Truedessa!

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    1. Thanks humbird, I hope you have a beautiful spring..

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  14. what a wonderful couplet to end...

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    1. Thank yo so much...happy spring..

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  15. Oh it will..it will..we are clapping out hands with possibility :)

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    1. That is the way to be rejoice as new doors open..

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  16. Perfect timing ~ Love this part:

    signaling change , splendid tulips
    beneath bluest skies, two souls meet

    Have a great weekend ~

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    1. Thanks Grace...enjoy your weekend...

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  17. This is beautiful. I like how you incorporte the eclipse, the moon, and love. The last line lingers in the mind. So lovely.

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    1. Thank you Myrna..I couldn't see the eclipse here, but I guess it was on my mind.

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  18. Very nice read, great thoughts!

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    1. tulips are always splendid..dez

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  20. Reflecting how the inner life mirrors the outside world...or is it the other way around?

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    1. hmm..could be either or I guess..

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  21. Loved the scenic beauty in your words :-)

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    1. Thanks Blue...I needed a smile..this went miles..

      Lord almighty
      I feel my temperature rising
      Higher, higher
      It's burning through to my soul

      Read more: Elvis Presley - Burning Love Lyrics | MetroLyrics

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    2. Love that studio version!

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    3. it sure did bring a smile Blue..

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