Monday, August 10, 2015

Beyond the Vapor




love is blind
naked & vulnerable
you think I cannot see you
but, I see beyond the vapor
filled room, your scent lingers
I feel you, even though
I cannot touch you...
swirls of smoke surround
us....taking deep breaths
our spirits become one
inhale...exhale..
where there is smoke
there is a fire
 where there is an ember
there is a spark
I see it in your
eyes
together we ignite

written for Magpie Tales 282

30 comments:

  1. Hmm there could be smoke where there was fire, fire could have been put out lol had to. A great spark that hits the mark.

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    1. That could be, but the embers always burn...then the spark ignites and the fire once again burns...

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  2. Thanks for visiting. I always enjoy your writes.

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    1. Hi Gail, always nice to have a friend visit..Hope you are well..

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  3. Sexy. :-) Nice write. The picture this week has turned everyone towards these sensual thoughts. Fun. :-)

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    1. Hi,

      I am just getting around to reading some of the poems and we certainly have some interesting writes. I think summer has put some poets in a sultry mood.

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  4. it has a story of passionate love

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    1. I think it does...but is love blind?

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  5. "where there is an ember there is a spark"...........wonderful!

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    1. Hi Sherry,

      I guess where this a spark there is fire..thanks for visiting my friend.

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  6. Whew. LIght up the night with that kinda intense love. This builds nicely. Love is what it is - and will find a way, if it is.

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    1. I often wonder what exactly is "love"

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  7. There is never fire without smoke.. if there's ember there is hope.

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    1. That is very true Bjorn...hope is a good thing..right?

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  8. I see it in your eyes, an amber ember...

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    1. smiling...nice to see you Berowne..

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  9. I wonder of they got married in the end :)))

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    1. Marriage... is overrated. Or so they say. (Who? They.)

      Hi True.

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  10. Your last line is killer, & the sizzle of your sensuality certainly reveals another side to the gal who goes on adventures with Captain Patt. Thanks for stopping by my place even without participating in dVerse this time; I always dig it.

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    1. smiling - You know I always find your writing intriguing...thanks for the visit here as well...always nice to see a friend.

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  11. Lovely take on the prompt

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  12. filled with passion as love rises in the smoke

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    1. interesting prompt that started a spark..I guess...thanks for commenting.

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