Monday, January 25, 2016

Blurry Silhoutte

photo by Francesca Woodman
spinning
out of control
do you recognize her
in the realm of vacant spaces
fading

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dancing
shadows of life
captured in black and white
blurry silhouette shades of grey
blending

~
empty
lot of desire
capturing swift movement
dancing into oblivion
waning

posted for Magpie Tales #303
form: Cinquain

32 comments:

  1. I think it's sad if the dance lead to numbness such as that.. dance should be passion

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    1. Totally agree Bjorn, the art of the dance should be filled with passion.

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  2. Trying to lose herself doesn't bode well for her spirits.

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    1. That is true Pat, the artist had a very short life.

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  3. Spinning to vanish or forget - very sad.

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  4. Like reading a dream. Well done! :)

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    1. Caught in the moment in her dizziness...

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  6. You have captured the essence of her photo .. well done.

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    1. Thank you Helen! I tried to write based on what I felt she felt...

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  7. Dancing into oblivion - what a sad escape. It captures the picture perfectly, though.

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    1. It is a sad escape this artist had a very short life.

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  8. You have captured her well, kiddo.

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    1. spinning is freeing and a way to cross to another dimension..

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  10. Really enjoyed the use of form for this image. Well done!

    =)

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  11. Hey Truedessa,

    Thanks for that. I was about to switch off my computer. Now, my heading is spinning! :)

    Gary, saying goodnight from lil' ol' England....

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    1. Gary from lil' ol' England, how are you? Glad you could spin by...:)

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    2. Hey, True, that worked. As me a question and you get a bonus comment! :) A whirl, a twirl, the flag doth unfurl. I'm just fine, thank you, True.

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    3. Good one, True Blue.
      Hi Gary!

      When I was a kid (don't say it), I wrote a poem about me spinning round and round and when I slowed down and everything I was looking at became more clear to me, I fell and died. That's depressing, right, but I was 18 back then so what do you expect ;)

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    4. hmm - interesting Blue...you fell and died and yet you are here spinning on the this big blue marble..and I might say I'm rather glad you are here...

      Tell me Blue how are you this winter day?

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    5. I'm dead tired. Sarcoidosis is a bitch, I tell ya. Anyway, thanks for asking, True. You keep putting a big smile on my face :)

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  12. hmm. I have a paragraph to write. I need to eat something. Far to emotional at the moment

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    1. Michael,

      Try to calm those emotions with a gentle sea of words.

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