Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Bubbles















sinking naked into her little oasis
daily strife slowly fizzles away
in a blue sea of foaming bubbles
drifting towards a flower filled
paradise, relaxing to soft music
inhaling rosebuds and lime trees
a poetess bravely dares to dream
please don't burst her bubble

posted for dVerse
Quadrille 3 - 44 words using
the word bubble.

36 comments:

  1. YES. So much yes. Love the fizzle and foaming and flower filled peace of this bubbly piece.

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    1. Thanks De, I did enjoy this prompt..

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  2. It sounds lovely........yes, dont burst the bubble!!!!

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    1. no busting, popping or bursting...

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  3. it is so nice to live in her own bubble and I join iN your plea not to break it..

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    1. A bubble world full of wonder I imagine..

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  4. a poetess bravely dares to dream
    please don't burst her bubble

    Let her bask in the pleasures of wonderful dreams which are hard to come by. Let her be Truedessa!

    Hank

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    1. Smiling Hank, sometimes one just has to be...

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  5. Oh ... i think this is a bubble I would love to have... no never break it.

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    1. Thanks Bjorn, it would be a delightful bubble ...

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  6. Sounds lovely. Glad you didn't end this with a kid banging on the bathroom door :-)

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    1. haha - no I can enjoy some peace and quiet and just dream...

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  7. Keep dreaming! I won't burst your bubble.

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    1. Hi Alex,

      I know you wouldn't...I could just float off into space...

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  8. Float, float on! Keep bubbling along!

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    1. That I will do singing this song!

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  9. A good place to dream...

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  10. Let those dreams bubble on up

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  11. Thanks for the bubble bath! Imagery scented with pure yum. ♥

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  12. No I won't ~ Enjoy the peace & bubbles ~ Thanks for playing along Truedessa ~

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    1. Yw - always fun to join in a fun prompt.

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  13. Oh, so true...we poets do NOT need our bubbles burst! We need to keep believing......

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    1. Mary, that is true we poets like to live in our bubble world

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  14. Hey again, Truedessa!

    Your bubble will never burst
    I would not think the worst
    Bubbly Gary floats by
    With a smile and a sigh....

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    1. floating by in a bubble
      with a sudsy smile...

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  15. You have described it so well...a place of peace, serenity and sometimes the beginnings of great poetry.

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    1. That is true...I need a bit of peace now and then

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  16. SMiLes..
    dream bubble
    never bursts
    as long
    as iT
    sImply
    moveS in
    Balance air..:)

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    1. may those bubble continue to overflow...

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  17. Ah, sigh! Love the reference to the poetess!

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