Tuesday, March 8, 2016

Atonement

our notes
whispers of love
message of atonement
mercy in words of devotion
forgive
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poems
sealed memories
forgiveness in a kiss
ceaselessly beating in my heart
true-love

posted for MagpieTales
form Cinquain

30 comments:

  1. True love, indeed. I can feel it in your words. Lovely writing, my friend.

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  2. I like the look of the structure!

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    1. Glad you liked that Dezzie...

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  3. Beautifully written form.

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    1. Ayala - nice to see you again

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  5. Forgiveness can sure come due with true love through and through

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  6. Praying our message reaches the sendee!

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    1. Alex,

      Praying all those messages reach their destination.

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  7. True love captured here in your beautiful poem and blog Truedessa!

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    1. Thank you Carrie for noticing...:)

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  8. Hi there... Very touching writings... I am a big fan of Anais Nin and I see some influence of her style in your poems... :)

    ~ shadowfire ~

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    1. Thank you, I will have to read some of her work.

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  9. you have penned very touching and awesome cinquains on the prompt!

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  10. I love writing in forms, and this works so well with you poem! Beautiful written.

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    1. Thanks Walter, I enjoy the cinquain.

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  11. Oh this is so romantic :-)

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  12. love and forgiveness. How sweet if they go on.

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    1. love and forgiveness are the key ...

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  13. Lovely words. I like the romance.

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