Thursday, March 31, 2016

Fire and Smoke

unknown source













 


and the clouds burst forth
with fire and smoke
the dragon soared
through silent stars
she woke to the rush
of thunder

in an hour of darkness
it was he alone who
would calm her
heavy heart

he woke at 3:00 am
to her soft cries
feeling her deep within
his soul she, the
navigator of the stars

their world was full
of magical  knights
through the mist
she blew him a kiss

for him she would
give her very heart
connected through
a mystical realm
bonded by love
 

author's note: wip - fragments from something I am writing
as the muse seems to re-arrange the story..

sharing with dVerse
 

56 comments:

  1. That is beautiful. If that is just the fragments, the whole must be incredible.
    I think he needs her just as much...

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Alex, it was inspired by another story :)

      Delete
  2. What a mystical and magical write, Truedessa. It is good that she has him to calm her heavy heart and that they have such a mystical connection!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Mary, I tend to be drawn to the mystical realm.

      Delete
  3. Two becoming one as together fragments are spun

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Smiling Pat, sometimes those fragments turn into something beautiful.

      Delete
  4. Love the bond of love, mystical and dreamy ~

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Grace, I hope you had a Happy Easter!

      Delete
  5. The connection between the subjects is enchanting. I'm curious about their story--how long have they been together, what sealed the bond, what brings the tears...

    Like Alex suggests, the whole must be marvelous. ♥

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you for your encouraging words. You make me what to polish it up and let it shine.

      Delete
  6. Replies
    1. well dragons are mystical...

      Delete
  7. Aw, come on. He probably just wants to get in her panties. ;)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. haha - now that made me laugh...

      Delete
  8. This is beautiful. I feel this exact same way about beer. Also, I guess my wife. :)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. haha - well hopefully it is a fine crafted beer..I am sure you heart is filled with love for your other half..

      Delete
  9. "She, the navigator of the stars"....this is such a beautiful poem of love - a mystical union.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you my friend, we need to catch up!

      Delete
  10. Magical, mysterious lovers. Beautiful!

    ReplyDelete
  11. Tender, passionate, contained and yet unbound, if that makes sense. Now let's see if I can leave a comment, been having trouble all day.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Marina,

      Your comment came through fine. Thanks for visiting and trying to leave a comment during a troublesome day. Hope today is better for you :)

      Delete
  12. I'm here because my dragon radar was alerted

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. glad you found your way with that radar...

      Delete
    2. Just don't tell her where that thing is located.

      Delete
    3. hmm...should this worry me Blue?

      Delete
  13. Beautiful. You did it again!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks Gail, how is that dragon of yours doing?

      Delete
  14. I absolutely love this. The mysticism is wonderful. It's like reading a story.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thank you Sandra..a story perhaps

      Delete
  15. Exquisite write as always :D

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Sanaa - thank you for your visits..

      Delete
  16. From one storyteller to another, hey, I dig your fragmented glance into the heart of something larger & more complex. What a concept, to be in love with a fire dragon; the height of daring fantasy & myth & legend. And, gosh, thanks again for being one of the most fervent fans of my BLACKTHORNE series.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Glenn,

      Well, there is nothing wrong with a bit of storytelling. I do enjoy your BLACKTHORNE series and I will continue to read each segment. I always check on open link to see if you have one posted even if I am not participating.

      Delete
  17. connected through
    a mystical realm
    bonded by love

    Great ending Truedessa! How blessed they can get where love is shared most lovingly!

    Hank

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hey Hank,

      Where have you been at the cat's mat? Suza is squeezing in at number 1.

      Delete
  18. I like your opening lines - dramatic and magical. :-)

    ~Imelda

    ReplyDelete
  19. Very beautiful and imaginative use of words.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Thanks, it sort of wrote itself...

      Delete
  20. Symbolic and balanced, excited and mysterious, breath taking stories, legend like - very cool, True!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Wow, thanks humbird, really appreciate your words.

      Delete
  21. Have a good weekend, True;)

    ReplyDelete
  22. It is quite lovely prose.

    ReplyDelete
  23. "she | the navigator of the stars... I love it, True Blue. How are you?

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hi Blue - navigating the stars, the constellations twinkle with delight...How are you Blue tell me true?

      Delete
    2. Exhausted. That about sums it up. Otherwise it's all good.

      Delete
    3. Blue, you work too hard and need some rest and so do I..

      Delete
  24. A visit to a magical place: your imagination!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Yes, my imagination seems to take flight and I am never sure where it will go...

      Delete
  25. Happy Saturday, True:) I'm looking forward to your next mystical poem story.

    ReplyDelete
  26. i need to visit this magical land you speak of.
    so atmospheric and mysterious.

    ReplyDelete