Thursday, June 9, 2016

Beyond the Rocks - New Possibility

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I hear the healing water call to me
 offering solid rock a place of rest
I sit and listen to the sound of the sea
 seeking  the key to life's treasure chest

offering solid rock a place of rest
  guiding me through the portal of dreams
seeking the key to life's  treasure chest
  transcending time all is not as it seems

guiding me through the portal of dreams
  opening a world full of vast possibility
 transcending time all is not as it seems
  navigating the stars,  phenomenal visibility
  
opening a world full of vast  possibility
    close your eyes,  drift  away with me
  navigating the stars, phenomenal visibility
    no anchor to hold us down, we are free

close your eyes, drift away with me
     beyond the sea,  wondrous indigo sky
  no anchor to hold us down, we are free
     believing in mystical dragons we can fly

beyond the sea, wondrous indigo sky
  I sit and listen to the sound of the sea
believing in mystical dragons we can fly
  I hear the healing water call to  me

posting for dVerse
open link night

 

34 comments:

  1. So glad you shared this serene poem with us tonight. Nice work with the form.

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    1. Thanks Victoria, I wrote the draft to this when I was at shore and felt I needed to honor the day!

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  2. Drift away to the stars...
    That is wonderful, Truedessa! Close your eyes and imagine beyond the dragon.

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    1. I am closing my eyes imagining a blue planet past the milky way.

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  3. This is so beautiful, gorgeous imagery, and an uplifting message. Sigh. Wonderful!

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  4. I can hear a song coming along,smiles ~ I am diving in right with you Trudessa ~

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    1. There could be a song indeed!

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  5. Lovely. I believe I have seen this form of poetry before, but for the life of me I can't think of its name. Well written. The words and lines flowed effortlessly.

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    1. The form is called a Pantoum

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  6. Oh my goodness! Such a beautiful form this is and you have executed it to perfection!!

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    1. thank you Sanaa for your lovely comment

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  7. Terrific poem; strong message; perfect fit to the form; one of your best, I think. You know me, I'm always poised for a dragon ride.

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    1. Ah yes, I think we both enjoy the dragon spirit.

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  8. This is such a lyrical poem..great use of the form.

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    1. Thanks, a tune does seems to come to mind

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  9. I do love the thought of that wonderful power of water... Maybe sometimes I feel like an old rock on the shore.

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    1. Sometimes we are the rock and sometimes we are the waterand perhaps, the sky on days when we want to fly

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  10. no anchor to hold us down, we are free
    believing in mystical dragons we can fly

    Powerful lines True! Gives a lot of hopes to what one aspires to do.

    Hank

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    1. We all need hope and to believe in our dreams

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  11. Let the imagination flow and off on a dragon one may surely go.

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    1. That one can do, imagination can take us to many places of the heart.

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  12. There is something about the sea... something that draws...
    Anna :o]

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    1. I totally agree the mystery of the sea calls the human spirit.

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  13. That's a tricky form to use, but you make it look easy! Lovely peaceful poem.

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  14. love the bit of fantasy in this. Beautiful use of form.

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    1. Thank you Bryan - I do enjoy a bit of fantasy

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  15. All the dreams we dream listening to water lap against rocks. Lovely.

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    1. Without dreams life would be empty.

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  16. Lovely poem and lovely form. The dreaming while listening to the water and watching the stars...

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    1. Thank you Toni ~ a daydream into another realm as the waters sing gently in the backdrop.

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  17. I am a lover of the sea -- the ocean -- so I'm right there with you drifting in the waves and looking out for that mystical dragon! :)

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    1. That mystical dragon is only a wish away...

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