Tuesday, June 7, 2016

Blue Guitar



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Hey , cowboy beware of the girl
with a vision in her eyes
she'll see the places in your
heart you desperately try to hide

caught in the dreams of night
strummin' her like a six string
fingers pluckin' every chord
makin' love, she'll sweetly sing

she loves you from afar
 under  a million golden stars
  weeping to your blue guitar
 
Hey,  cowboy beware of the girl
with a vision in her eyes
she'll see the places in your
heart you desperately try to hide

caught in the dreams of night
lost in the rhythm of your songs
her heart catching every beat
writin' words, fixin' wrongs

she loves you from afar
 under a million golden stars
  weeping to your blue guitar

Hey,  cowboy beware of the girl
with a vision in her eyes
she'll see the places in your
heart you desperately try to hide

posted for dVerse - Writing songs


28 comments:

  1. Hi Truedessa,

    Seems she senses the emotions the cowboy tries to keep secret. His guitar strums her heart.

    Gary.

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    1. Gary,

      How are you my friend? I think she senses many things.

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  2. Somehow I knew you would aced this ~ Love the refrain of the girl weeping to your blue guitar ~ Beware cowboy, smiles ~

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    1. Thanks Grace ~ actually I wrote this in about 30 minutes.

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  3. I think that girl is my blue guitar...
    That would make great song lyrics!

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    1. Do you have a blue guitar? One of your six, you need to acquire a 7th. One for each day of the week.

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  4. That girl with visions in her eyes, she sees deeply......I, too, loved the part about her weeping to his blue guitar.

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    1. Hi Sherry,

      We need to catch up?

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  5. This is so good. It spoke to me in a musical form right from the start..very sing-able but poetically strong. I am curious...have you set this to a tune yet?

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    1. Thanks for the prompt - It was fun!

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  6. love the line "writin' words, fixin' wrongs", because I saw writin' as also "righting"...wrongs.

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  7. Oh I think that cowboy will settle down... And maybe that's just fine. What a great lyric.. So fantastic to be able to hear it sung

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    1. Thanks Bjorn, I think some cowboys never settle down.

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  8. Hi Truedessa - lovely image of a cowboy with a blue mood and guitar ... all will be well ... your readers are so right with their comments - very clever and I loved it ... cheers Hilary

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    1. Thanks Hilary - Cheers to you as well!

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  9. Who loves who best? Is it cowboy or is it cowgirl...it seems they both look for the other....loved it.

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    1. Ah, that might be quite the question, I guess we will never know.

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  10. Great lyrics indeed, nailed it, as you do with the songs that come on through.

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    1. Thanks Pat, my wandering mind just had a tune so I played along.

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  11. Beautifully created.

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  12. she loves you from afar
    under a million golden stars
    weeping to your blue guitar

    Unforgettable lines..! Gorgeous write :D

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    1. I agree, they keep playing in my mind.

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  13. Weeping to the blue guitar......
    strummin' this tune in my head -- puttin' on my cowgirl boots loving this! :)

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    1. Well, glad you were loving it! Thanks

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  14. Oh.. cool... reminds
    me of the Guitar
    Man that SonG
    by Bread
    thAT BrinGS
    tHe heARt
    LoVe arT
    BAck
    hoMe
    to LoVe's
    Roost more..:)

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    1. haha - I had to go find that video and listen to the song!

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