Tuesday, December 13, 2016

Room for Time



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dream the pathways of mystics
allow yourself to be artistic
release your mind of all debris
enter the house of time with me

leave your moccasins at the door
open your heart, let us explore
the multi-verse is ours to see
enter the house of time with me

we are lovers in cosmic stardust
raising our consciousness with trust
bed of dreams our souls are now free
enter the house of time with me

for Poetics at dVerse 
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19 comments:

  1. I love "We are lovers in cosmic stardust / raising our consciousness with trust."

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  2. Enter the house of time with me.....a beautiful refrain that acts to pull it all together here....releasing the mind of debris...taking a chance to be creative...to love in cosmic stardust.
    I love this!
    Great take on the prompt!

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  3. I would be honoured to dally in the hallways of time with you.

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  4. and so our endless spirits choose to come into this world, abide a while in the house of time. a fine poem.

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  5. such easy and delightful rhymes

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  6. we are lovers in cosmic stardust
    raising our consciousness with trust
    bed of dreams our souls are now free
    enter the house of time with me

    Lovely!!❤️

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  7. And a moment we would want locked in time forever. Nice, Truedessa!

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  8. In such a time, no reason or rhyme, lost there in one's prime, is quite the worthwhile time. Okay...maybe some rhyme lol

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  9. We live in a multiverse,how clever :)

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  10. You pulled out the stops & got all cosmic on us; bravo. Yes, your refrain really resonates--/the house of time/ reminds me of a Lenard Cohen lyric; smile--& absolutely, at this time, during the holidays, we must be reminded that /we are lovers in cosmic stardust/ White light hugs coming your way.

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  11. The time as a house... got me thinking of time as the fourth dimension... as something moving.. and yes you pull it off with great cadence and rhyme.

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  12. I love the repetition of the invitation, "Enter the house of time with me." Relationship, all things important take time and we need to be willing to enter.

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  13. I love the refrain of the last line with:

    enter the house of time with me

    I also like this line: we are lovers in cosmic stardust. Lovely share ~

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  14. A delightful and well expressed invitation

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  15. SMiLes.. my FriEnd
    Truewanderings
    as Truedessa
    Dreamtime now
    no ownerships
    give and
    share wHEre
    Art Flows
    Free
    iN
    alWays
    noW..
    far and few
    'tween those
    who share but
    alWays
    room
    to
    giVe..
    As aLL thAT iS noW..:)

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  16. allow yourself to be artistic
    release your mind of all debris

    Creativity needs to have space to be stimulated. There should not be any inhibitions to limit the openings. Rightly so True!

    Hank

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  17. Wow, truly beautiful! I love your words!

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  18. The house of time sounds like a beautiful place to enter...

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  19. I am in awe of how beautifully you write poetry, Truedessa! I can't begin to imagine how you do it, but I certainly enjoy your insights! I found these words to be deeply moving and profound:
    "we are lovers in cosmic stardust
    raising our consciousness with trust"
    They resonate with me on a personal level and a cosmic/geological level!

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