Monday, September 11, 2017

Does Free = Priceless



I offered you my heart and soul
I offered you my love, forever free
I offered you space for your dreams
I offered you unending friendship
I offered you forgiveness, always
I offered you a place in my world
acceptance of my imperfections
priceless

posted for dVerse 
Quadrille #40
writing poetry containing 44 words
incorporating the word free

13 comments:

  1. Accepting another's imperfections does seem to be priceless and perhaps worth all the other offerings mentioned.

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  2. This should be enough for anyone to stay.. as everyone knows that perfection always comes with dents.

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  3. I'm with The Beatles on this one: money can't buy you love.

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  4. Unconditional love, that's the way to go *smiles*

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  5. Agape love is priceless. (And there is One who does offer it for free.)

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  6. A gift that is indeed priceless.

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  7. Baring all for free and having it in return is priceless indeed.

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  8. Priceless, indeed. Isn't this what we all want, that safe place? Wonderful.

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  9. The past tense you used sounds like someone else's imperfections clouded paradise.

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  10. we don't think to offer our imperfections... nice to be accepted with them though!

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  11. We all need to be accepted in spite of ourselves.
    As always, well written.

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  12. Really wonderful poem. Thank you.

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  13. I did enjoying reading your poem, especially....
    I offered you space for your dreams.... and your ultimate line too.

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