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| artwork - Fay Collins |
clouds
depart
revealing
rich greenery
here you will find me
listening to bird-songs
welcoming another day
after the rains, life flourishes
splashing blue skies over the landscape
here you will find me, in tranquility
posted for dVerse
writing poetry inspired by the artwork of Fay Collins
I like the serene images in the poem and the rhyme and repetition. The form is nice, too.
ReplyDeleteThank you, I fell a sense of tranquility in the greenery.
DeleteI like how life flashes blue skies.
ReplyDeleteRevealing blue skies a sense of light
DeleteI love to walk inside a painting into such peace.
ReplyDeleteMe too Björn, listening to bird songs!
DeleteI love the way this poem opens out, like clouds revealing the landscape - the form works so well here. I think you really capture the sense of the landscape - and life - emerging after rain so well. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThe artwork just spoke to me, a revelation of sorts.
DeleteJust enjoying the day in such a peaceful spot. Not a bad place for one to be found.
ReplyDeleteI guess you could say I was getting lost in the landscape only to be found.
DeleteAs the mist rises - fits the painting well!
ReplyDeleteI like that as the mist rises, beauty is revealed.
DeleteI missed the clouds on first reading and this time the word caught my eye.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful peaceful write Truedessa. Thank you.
Anna :o]
Thank you Anna for visiting!
DeleteI adore right after it rains on my bike rides. Everything is fresh again.
ReplyDeleteI agree especially when the sun comes out.
DeleteYou took inspiration from a painting, and gave us a poem that would make one believe that the poem inspired the painting instead. Well done.
ReplyDeleteHi Silver Fox,
DeleteThank you, Inspiration grows inspiration.
Life flourishes indeed, very uplifting attitude ~
ReplyDeleteThank you Grace!
DeleteNature is best, it soothes, refreshes, gives life, I'm with you...
ReplyDeleteShadow, that is does it rejuvenates the heart, mind and body.
DeleteGorgeous painting and beautiful words!!!
ReplyDeletePerfect fit for the painting...I'd like to be found there.
ReplyDelete“...splashing blue skies over the landscape...” Love this image, Trudessa!
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