Sunday, April 15, 2018

Portal to My Heart

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I offered you the portal to my heart
navigating a world of unknown parts
on mystical wings of truest desire
awakening dreams of passion and fire

dancing with poetry, beyond the stars
entering a realm that was only ours
embracing cosmic light, newly inspired
awakening dreams of passion and fire

soaring the multi(verse) two souls entwined
touching you in the spheres of my mind
our imagination lifting us higher
awakening dreams of passion and fire

I offered you the portal to my heart
awakening dreams of passion and fire


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Thank you for reading! 

41 comments:

  1. A magical write - I loved it!

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  2. Such a beautiful tale of love that truly soars.

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  3. Romantic and pure... wonderfully penned .. I am always a great fan of a true love story

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    1. How can one not be a fan of a love story? Thank you for reading.

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    1. Thanks Alex, purity comes from the heart!

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  5. Ah, love! The heart is ever hopeful!

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  6. This is beyond beautiful!💜 Especially love; "dancing with poetry, beyond the stars."💜

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    1. Sanaa your kind comment brings a smile.

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  7. What a beautiful and ethereal poem, Truedessa. Really, I had been thinking about you - wondering if you were back to good health. So I am relieved to see you today.

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    1. Mary thank you for thinking of me, I am slowly making my way back.

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  8. Oh sweet balm as I read this poem of love....

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  9. A portal for only two as they intertwine and create one that's known to only them.

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    1. Hi Pat, a special portal to a special world.

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  10. Luv the soar of souls through poetry and imagination

    Thank you for dropping by my Sunday Standard today Trudessa

    much love...

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    1. Thanks Gillena, have a lovely Sunday.

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  11. The portal to your heart...beautiful.

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  12. love the illustration for this one!

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    1. The illustration is the "star" card, a friend had me pull one from a deck and this was the card chosen. Twas, magical since I wrote the poem first.

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  13. Nice. Yes, we must open up to receive and give love. Your poem is a sweet love story.

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    1. Thank you Myrna - a story or dream who really knows.

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  14. This is lovely. And, once again, your rhyme is stellar. I thought the act of offering a portal to your heart was a stunning image ... to 'two souls entwined'.

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    1. Thank you Wendy as always you make me smile.

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  15. A lovely sonnet ...
    ZQ

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    1. Thank you ZQ, I haven't written one in a while and thought it would work well with what I was thinking and feeling.

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  16. Monday WRites 150 is live; i invite you to link in

    much love...

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    1. Thank you for the invite. I may have to try and link in one Monday.

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  17. I really liked that. But me being me, all the way until the end I was expecting some tragedy to befall the relationship. Glad it didn't.

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    1. Hi Silver, well sometimes there can be happiness.

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  18. A well crafted piece of writing, again you have given us such an enjoyable read.

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  19. Such a loving, magical write! I love it!! Big Hugs Truedessa!

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  20. Wow, these words dance with love *smiles*

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    1. Dancing with words and love can bring joy.

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