Monday, April 30, 2018

You Are


you are the poem after the rain
you are the song beyond the fog
you are love's sweetest refrain

you are life flowing in my veins
you are blue sky above the smog
you are the poem after the rain

you are a melody that remains
you  are a drink of magical grog
you are love's sweetest refrain

you are reality riding a dream train
you are rhymes, verses and dialogue
you are the poem after the rain

you are the memories that remain
you are the song beyond the fog
you are love's sweetest refrain

you are soaring in another plane
you are the path, I wish to jog
you are the poem after the rain
you are love's sweetest refrain

author's note: Thank you Blue
"you are the song beyond the fog"

28 comments:

  1. Sure quite the flow. Having one as that I'm sure all wish it so.

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    1. Thanks Pat, I wrote this over the weekend.

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  2. Yes, that really flowed well with the repeating lines.

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  3. I love the structure, as well as the actual rhyme scheme!

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    1. Hi Silver, Thanks for coming over for a visit!

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  4. Delightful ... wonderful read - cheers Hilary

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  5. I love it. What a sweet poem!

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    1. Thank you Crystal! It is nice to see you again.

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  6. What a wonderful love sonnet. That's really a great devotion. It's almost Shakespearean.

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    1. Thank you Mark, I do like Shakespeare..

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  7. A beautiful poem with effective repetition and rhyme! I love the circularity of it.

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    1. Thank you Kim, the circularity of it, I like that!

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  8. Oh gosh I love this!💖 Especially; "you are the memories that remain you are the song beyond the fog you are love's sweetest refrain."💖

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  9. A lovely villanelle... the repetition of you made it into such a strong love poem

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    1. Hi Bjorn, A form I sometimes like to use and in this case it felt right.

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  10. You are the song beyond the fog. Yes, you are.

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    1. Blushing Blue...lets follow the melody...

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  11. Truly, truly beautiful!!!

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  12. This is extremely beautiful! Love it.

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    1. Hello My Friend! I hope all is well.

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  13. Great structure as a poem! Got to try it True!

    Hank

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    1. Hi Hank, Yes, please try it I am curious as to what you would create.

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  14. Your poem is a song and one which deserves to be sung.

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    1. It plays in my head and perhaps that is enough...

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