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A sliver of sunlight
ushers in a new day
footprints of yesterday
are washed away
waves whispering
a morning song
gulls laugh in the
ocean sprays
cloud people
awaken early
to a spectrum of light
there are castles
to build and dreams
to fulfill
written for dVerse
a quadrille of 44 words
incorporating the word early
Thanks for visiting
Very smooth delivery and easy voice to read. Interesting offering on cloud people, pretty cool. I enjoyed v much.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the visit, I am glad it had a smooth delivery just like the gentle morning waves.
DeleteEvery day dawns new hope for dreams fulfilled.
ReplyDeleteEvery day a chance to rebuild.
DeleteBeautiful last stanza!
ReplyDeleteI like the fanciful cloud people going about their work!
ReplyDeleteI do enjoy cloud people...
DeleteI love the opening stanzas. They remind me of when I lived by the sea and walked our dog on the beach every morning.
ReplyDeleteSmiling glad a happy memory surfaced.
DeleteA new castle can be built out of every day indeed
ReplyDeleteA new castle just waiting to form in the sands of the day!
Deletefrom start to end your poem held magic and delight, this really resonated with me
ReplyDeleteSmiling thank you Gina - Magic is part of the allure of life.
DeleteThe beach has a completely different feel during the early morning hours, doesn't it?
ReplyDeleteYes It does! I woke up at 5:00 am while traveling to watch the sunrise. There is a quiet sense of awakening.
DeleteI like those castles and dreams at the end.
ReplyDeleteMe too Frank...thank you for visiting. What would your castle look like?
Deleteabsolutely wonderful to read and ease into the words - it was very much like walking along the ocean's shore ... and cloud people - how creatively worded and idea-ed. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for taking the time for a stroll.
DeleteA beautiful way to start the morning. Loved it, my friend.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sherry, I know how you love the beach.
DeleteWash Away The Buildings
ReplyDeleteEarly Building New
Washing
Away
Building Old..:)
The tides comes and washes many buildings away. Your words made me think of so many who lost their homes in the recent storms.
DeleteMay they find strength..,
I so love the castles to build and dreams to fulfill... the road goes on and on.
ReplyDeleteThat is does Bjorn :)
DeleteA soothing rhythm with refreshing imagery! You portray the early start of a beautiful day at a serene locale!
ReplyDeleteThank you Frank, mornings on the beach can be refreshing to the soul.
DeleteLooking forward to that bright new day. Love the voice of optimism.
ReplyDeleteHi Grace in times of turbulence one needs to try to be optimistic.
DeleteTruly beautiful! Loved it! Thanks Truedessa! Big Hugs!
ReplyDeleteThank you and hugs back, I will have to stop over and see what you are creating,
DeleteThose closing lines is absolutely exquisite! ❤️
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful. Very soothing yet energetic, if that makes any sense at all.
ReplyDeleteIt makes sense to me - thank you
DeleteI love this. What a glorious morning.
ReplyDeleteHi Sandra! I hope your morning is going well.
DeleteOh, the hope of the early light is so sweet and serenading. I loved the idea of cloud people.
ReplyDelete-HA
How peaceful and hopeful. You paint a lovely picture with your words.
ReplyDeleteI especially like the descriptive: sliver of sunlight and waves whispering.
ReplyDeleteI like the phrase...
ReplyDelete"there are castles
to build and dreams
to fulfill"...so representative of the opportunities and hopes that a new day brings.