tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post1441464902549869122..comments2024-03-29T03:07:01.375-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: Beautiful TransformationTruedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger40125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-64104658570979169712016-07-12T19:08:12.335-04:002016-07-12T19:08:12.335-04:00Thanks MishaThanks MishaTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-90014254399957496422016-07-12T09:30:37.973-04:002016-07-12T09:30:37.973-04:00Lovely poem. I like how all the sentences connect....Lovely poem. I like how all the sentences connect.Misha Gerrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06364173848456424521noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-91146563061336905802016-07-11T21:48:12.799-04:002016-07-11T21:48:12.799-04:00Thanks SusanThanks SusanTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-27234368687335729722016-07-11T21:47:48.426-04:002016-07-11T21:47:48.426-04:00Myrna thank you for the lovely comment! I am so gl...Myrna thank you for the lovely comment! I am so glad you could hear the words as a prayer of some sorts.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-83923953777541884372016-07-11T13:47:45.257-04:002016-07-11T13:47:45.257-04:00Really interesting form. It worked well, I believe...Really interesting form. It worked well, I believe.Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-59181652773869217672016-07-11T10:06:52.706-04:002016-07-11T10:06:52.706-04:00I rarely write in any specific form, but this one ...I rarely write in any specific form, but this one I may try. The loops mimic how our minds work, in loops connecting our thoughts. But the content here is what most impresses me. I like the hope you weave through this, the faith that transformation is possible. I consider this a prayer for us as individuals but also for the world. I think this is my favorite of yours now.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-4773932583890638032016-07-11T06:25:29.318-04:002016-07-11T06:25:29.318-04:00Hi Rosemary,
I went back to check the source and ...Hi Rosemary,<br /><br />I went back to check the source and it was created by someone named Hellon in 2009. It looks like you invented it before Hellon :)Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-36791480699949095562016-07-11T06:20:19.512-04:002016-07-11T06:20:19.512-04:00I think I'd agree with you Keith.I think I'd agree with you Keith. Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-43452660349505040442016-07-11T06:19:54.485-04:002016-07-11T06:19:54.485-04:00Hi Hank,
I recently found this form and I thought...Hi Hank,<br /><br />I recently found this form and I thought I'd try it. Thanks for visiting!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-32191671083501385012016-07-11T02:37:26.817-04:002016-07-11T02:37:26.817-04:00The form is very appropriate for your subject matt...The form is very appropriate for your subject matter.<br /><br />(I thought I invented this form in 1992 – and in a way I did, as I never encountered it anywhere else until recently. But I didn't give it a name, or publicise it – except by including a poem I wrote like that in one of my books. And I only ever wrote one poem that way. Loop poetry is a very good name for it. I wonder how many poets create their own forms, new to them, only to find that others have created the same ones? I suspect it happens quite a lot.)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-1759312347528490432016-07-11T02:34:17.607-04:002016-07-11T02:34:17.607-04:00I think the world needs this poem in light of rece...I think the world needs this poem in light of recent events :)Optimistic Existentialisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11507986337866049924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-24318571403643860602016-07-10T21:04:23.448-04:002016-07-10T21:04:23.448-04:00Loop poetry! That is a nice way of making things s...Loop poetry! That is a nice way of making things seem near than they are! Great way of expression, True!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-12464417891439944262016-07-10T19:28:55.811-04:002016-07-10T19:28:55.811-04:00Thank you Wendy :)Thank you Wendy :)Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-21612462541938910752016-07-10T19:28:27.885-04:002016-07-10T19:28:27.885-04:00Thank Old Egg, go ahead and try a loopy I will be ...Thank Old Egg, go ahead and try a loopy I will be sure to read it :)Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-62868214393791327662016-07-10T19:27:52.186-04:002016-07-10T19:27:52.186-04:00Thanks Donna this form was new to me, but it just ...Thanks Donna this form was new to me, but it just felt right today.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-88024446106085360892016-07-10T19:27:06.764-04:002016-07-10T19:27:06.764-04:00I have to hold on to the belief that the world wil...I have to hold on to the belief that the world will change for the better at some point.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-52668739219720851942016-07-10T19:26:32.430-04:002016-07-10T19:26:32.430-04:00haha - You made me smile as you know I am a bit lo...haha - You made me smile as you know I am a bit loopdy loo...Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-51805709540464951572016-07-10T19:26:09.563-04:002016-07-10T19:26:09.563-04:00Thank you Kerry, I believe love is a powerful sour...Thank you Kerry, I believe love is a powerful source of energy.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-21614435831717918752016-07-10T19:25:40.845-04:002016-07-10T19:25:40.845-04:00each word building up to the final transformation....each word building up to the final transformation...Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-86933755728567539952016-07-10T19:25:07.868-04:002016-07-10T19:25:07.868-04:00Thanks Sherry! The journey of life I guess..Thanks Sherry! The journey of life I guess..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-6578032182588356532016-07-10T19:24:32.481-04:002016-07-10T19:24:32.481-04:00Thanks Gillena! I am a bit loopy :)Thanks Gillena! I am a bit loopy :)Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-26753559559012116892016-07-10T19:24:29.359-04:002016-07-10T19:24:29.359-04:00Lovely words set in a wonderful form ... a beautif...Lovely words set in a wonderful form ... a beautiful metamorphosis of a poem.Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-57143708757302849892016-07-10T19:24:08.574-04:002016-07-10T19:24:08.574-04:00The cocoon offers warmth and a chance to rejuvenat...The cocoon offers warmth and a chance to rejuvenate.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-39084525558264570642016-07-10T19:23:08.065-04:002016-07-10T19:23:08.065-04:00Thanks SanaaThanks SanaaTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-44240691238811431802016-07-10T19:22:52.639-04:002016-07-10T19:22:52.639-04:00Life is about transformation..Life is about transformation..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.com