tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post2597902423565331257..comments2024-03-29T03:07:01.375-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: dVerse April 16, 2013 - Amnesia Truedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger35125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-24496243071350976452013-05-09T13:25:14.127-04:002013-05-09T13:25:14.127-04:00Hi,
So, glad you enjoyed my poetic song. Always n...Hi,<br /><br />So, glad you enjoyed my poetic song. Always nice to make one jump. What is this about losing your car? Sorry about your memory lapse but, at least you remember everything about love how magical that loved touched you so deep that you retained every moment.<br /><br />May all your memories be special ones..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-58507996891435270952013-05-08T14:06:44.633-04:002013-05-08T14:06:44.633-04:00The Cat
Was asleep
On his Mat.<b>The Cat</b> <br />Was asleep<br />On his Mat.<br />Blue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-20305024835508084862013-05-08T14:05:32.154-04:002013-05-08T14:05:32.154-04:00I love poetic verses in a song.
I always jump up w...<b>I love poetic verses in a song.</b><br />I always jump up when I hear one come along.<br /><br />Amnesia. My late Granny suffered from it. I, too, suffer from it. It's genetic. I keep losing my car. (You may laugh now.) It's terrible. Strangely enough....<br />when it comes to love, I remember <i>e.v.e.r.y.t.h.i.n.g.</i>. <br />Blue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-27110162900766686552013-05-04T02:14:46.369-04:002013-05-04T02:14:46.369-04:00Thank you for reading and your kind rely. I am hap...Thank you for reading and your kind rely. I am happy you enjoyed my song.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-78118098319624925362013-05-03T04:19:22.912-04:002013-05-03T04:19:22.912-04:00Brilliant imagery in this. It should be set to mus...Brilliant imagery in this. It should be set to music. Great job, I love it!James Rainsfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12981399551842327691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-34967386511561541152013-05-02T18:11:15.162-04:002013-05-02T18:11:15.162-04:00Thank you for reading my work, it is appreciated.Thank you for reading my work, it is appreciated.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-36004693318912965882013-05-02T09:36:22.596-04:002013-05-02T09:36:22.596-04:00The lover's lament...love lost and recalled. H...The lover's lament...love lost and recalled. How we yearn for our affections to be returned, and how painful when they are not. A lovely song.JayGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15817675980200134668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-80263694659587528612013-05-01T16:41:17.480-04:002013-05-01T16:41:17.480-04:00Pamela,
Thanks you so much! Pamela,<br /><br />Thanks you so much! Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-45173095274253697182013-05-01T14:02:04.075-04:002013-05-01T14:02:04.075-04:00"Was it a distorted illusion or some sort of ..."Was it a distorted illusion or some sort of delusion", I wish I had written that, Truedessa. Nice flow to this.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-84487902526915497632013-05-01T06:39:26.921-04:002013-05-01T06:39:26.921-04:00Hi Kelvin,
Thanks so much for sharing your story....Hi Kelvin,<br /><br />Thanks so much for sharing your story. I have always enjoyed writing poems and songs. I guess it is just how the spirit moves me at the moment. Sometimes, an idea will just pop into my head and I'll run with it. I am a dreamer so many of my poems/songs come to me in the early morning hours when I am in that in between state of mind. You my friend are a gifted poet and I always enjoy your work. I think you have many miles to travel and will leave imprints along the road of your journey. Perhaps, there is a song within you waiting to be sung.<br /><br />Thanks for the delightful comment..I always enjoy stories within the realm of one's life.<br /><br />Bright Dreams!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-8396415785968924832013-05-01T06:00:23.682-04:002013-05-01T06:00:23.682-04:00...fantastic my friend! ...i can imagine the first......fantastic my friend! ...i can imagine the first part being wrapped then followed by a melo r&b like rhythm in chorus... i may at times easily write a poem but to write / compose a song is something superbly done by superb people like you... ha... i remember back in college humanities class... my professor set a raffle box... inside were folded coupons of the possible tasks we would be doing for the class over the whole period of 2 hours... i was hoping to pick 'ode' or 'idylls' but unfortunately i got the coupon containing 'song'... so had no choice but to compose one back then... & how could i compose one in 2 hours? ha... well it turned out really sounding awkward.... haha... it was written in my native language & couldn't remember where i placed it now... lol... just sharin'... smiles... i have enjoyed your song... keep 'em coming...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-16718928269577150722013-04-30T21:29:26.410-04:002013-04-30T21:29:26.410-04:00Hank,
Thanks so much! Hank,<br /><br />Thanks so much! Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-82352122118532875682013-04-30T21:26:23.018-04:002013-04-30T21:26:23.018-04:00The chorus is the icing! It's a whiff of fresh...The chorus is the icing! It's a whiff of freshness from the usuals that one gets. Wonderfully written Trudessa!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-24747236712348590422013-04-30T20:50:04.856-04:002013-04-30T20:50:04.856-04:00Mary,
thanks so much..Mary,<br /><br />thanks so much..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-85179268424171744762013-04-30T20:43:59.350-04:002013-04-30T20:43:59.350-04:00This poem definitely begs to be read! Love the wa...This poem definitely begs to be read! Love the way you wrote this...I can hear that chorus!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-56118841832902622752013-04-30T20:41:39.216-04:002013-04-30T20:41:39.216-04:00ayala,
Thank you!ayala,<br /><br />Thank you!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-79385658220610724152013-04-30T20:41:15.357-04:002013-04-30T20:41:15.357-04:00Laurie,
Thanks so much!Laurie,<br /><br />Thanks so much!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-91488993602864606192013-04-30T20:40:57.225-04:002013-04-30T20:40:57.225-04:00Hi Grace,
Thanks so much! A reading that might be...Hi Grace,<br /><br />Thanks so much! A reading that might be fun..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-52755095666428009242013-04-30T20:39:37.193-04:002013-04-30T20:39:37.193-04:00Hi,
I am sorry to say no music yet..but, I do hea...Hi,<br /><br />I am sorry to say no music yet..but, I do hear it in my head.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-38041298491485503212013-04-30T20:37:24.493-04:002013-04-30T20:37:24.493-04:00Nice! Love it! :)Nice! Love it! :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-37144170343254656532013-04-30T20:15:21.421-04:002013-04-30T20:15:21.421-04:00It's wonderful... I'd love to hear it perf...It's wonderful... I'd love to hear it performed!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-70213392766803118642013-04-30T20:04:44.415-04:002013-04-30T20:04:44.415-04:00Very nice beat and chorus ~ Perhaps you can do a ...Very nice beat and chorus ~ Perhaps you can do a reading too ~<br /><br />Good to see you Truedessa ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-3508795480481007892013-04-30T19:30:06.386-04:002013-04-30T19:30:06.386-04:00I like it! Have you put it to music? If not, you s...I like it! Have you put it to music? If not, you should!marblesinmypockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2013/04/29/spirit-guard/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-40077859935586752082013-04-30T18:16:30.920-04:002013-04-30T18:16:30.920-04:00Pat,
What is this I was a no show (lol)
I will h...Pat, <br /><br />What is this I was a no show (lol)<br />I will have to go visit your zoo and<br />see what is what..as you are on my <br />daily rounds for a chuckle or two<br />wouldn't miss a day to read what you say<br /><br />Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-58550975214704116072013-04-30T18:06:56.943-04:002013-04-30T18:06:56.943-04:00Blogger shunned you
Never showed up in the blogrol...Blogger shunned you<br />Never showed up in the blogroll at my zooPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.com