tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post3537296379976893664..comments2024-03-28T20:56:08.251-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: Starlight RideTruedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-62451669809922885492017-04-11T20:42:11.124-04:002017-04-11T20:42:11.124-04:00Powerful, beautiful, loving! Truly magical! You sh...Powerful, beautiful, loving! Truly magical! You should publish your poems!! Big Hugs!Magic Love Crowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14133368208464734546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-41705161374650786462017-04-09T23:55:29.000-04:002017-04-09T23:55:29.000-04:00Beautifully song-like.Beautifully song-like.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-74931629954427839382017-04-09T22:50:49.880-04:002017-04-09T22:50:49.880-04:00I'm imagining birds flying as I read.I'm imagining birds flying as I read. colleenhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-5013793789841484572017-04-09T20:58:17.464-04:002017-04-09T20:58:17.464-04:00And once again, you do such good things with repet...And once again, you do such good things with repetition. 'unfurling my wings, I want to flee' has such a haunting quality. Lovely writing! Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-82463716597680411202017-04-09T18:12:18.863-04:002017-04-09T18:12:18.863-04:00Great lyrical poem. Enchanting story too (combined...Great lyrical poem. Enchanting story too (combined - early Joan Baez)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-7034565728695878812017-04-09T17:29:29.583-04:002017-04-09T17:29:29.583-04:00A wonderful journey...sometimes one needs to flee ...A wonderful journey...sometimes one needs to flee into one's dreams!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-82910351678829390992017-04-09T17:25:34.588-04:002017-04-09T17:25:34.588-04:00Love the magic in this. It is a delightful ride.Love the magic in this. It is a delightful ride.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-74616550493890853092017-04-09T17:22:26.587-04:002017-04-09T17:22:26.587-04:00A magical tale.A magical tale.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-24647081241875038532017-04-09T16:53:18.842-04:002017-04-09T16:53:18.842-04:00The makings of a wonderful and beautiful song.
ZQThe makings of a wonderful and beautiful song.<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-75687619435272181592017-04-09T16:42:59.552-04:002017-04-09T16:42:59.552-04:00somewhere across the great divide
you and I ride a...somewhere across the great divide<br />you and I ride an emotional tide<br />we bridge the gap, the great void<br />spiraling in the beltway of asteroids<br /><br />Oh yes!!❤️ Gorgeously penned!!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-38428759360165046892017-04-09T14:48:56.033-04:002017-04-09T14:48:56.033-04:00This is truly beautiful. I especially love "w...This is truly beautiful. I especially love "within my heart, a wild dragon flies." Fly high, my friend.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-10843763467384790752017-04-09T13:50:57.790-04:002017-04-09T13:50:57.790-04:00Magical and rhythmic! Magical and rhythmic! Sherri B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00834386300886224116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-737291333093898382017-04-09T13:11:49.025-04:002017-04-09T13:11:49.025-04:00A lovely, mystical walk (or flight) in a dream wor...A lovely, mystical walk (or flight) in a dream world!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-60947503710997967282017-04-09T11:58:57.153-04:002017-04-09T11:58:57.153-04:00Your poem reads like a chant, a spell that turns t...Your poem reads like a chant, a spell that turns the images into reality. The repetition does a wonderful job at making the dream images clearer and clearer as we move through the poem. By the time I was done reading, I wanted to unfurl my wings and be part of the dream. :-)Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-61452422314604579372017-04-09T11:51:48.260-04:002017-04-09T11:51:48.260-04:00"soaring to the melody of your heart
in the r..."soaring to the melody of your heart<br />in the rapture of love, needing no chart"<br /><br />what a way to fly, absolutely beautiful<br /><br />Happy you dropped in at my Sunday Standard today<br /><br />much love...Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-82604786397329622122017-04-09T11:20:27.178-04:002017-04-09T11:20:27.178-04:00I sleep safe and secure by your side
soaring to th...I sleep safe and secure by your side<br />soaring to the melody of your heart<br />in the rapture of love, needing no chart<br /><br />Such a feeling is what one so desires. It is the peace and harmony that prevails that's what love is. Wonderful lines True!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-7752750890265496322017-04-09T10:59:19.550-04:002017-04-09T10:59:19.550-04:00True, if you haven't published your poems, you...True, if you haven't published your poems, you should think about it. They are so delicate and evocative. I love each and everyone.Sandra Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03814573408898140885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-46381232426227194322017-04-09T10:47:55.316-04:002017-04-09T10:47:55.316-04:00Your poem is a wonderful tale told in the traditio...Your poem is a wonderful tale told in the tradition of ballads. I think the refrain adds a very interesting bridge between fantasy and dreams.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-75752544984535782902017-04-09T09:48:43.652-04:002017-04-09T09:48:43.652-04:00Beautiful, out of this world beautiful in narrativ...Beautiful, out of this world beautiful in narrative, meter, repetition, magic! This is my new favorite of all your poems!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-71376441452640909802017-04-09T09:40:12.527-04:002017-04-09T09:40:12.527-04:00Your subject matter and words capture my imaginati...Your subject matter and words capture my imagination. I find so much inspiration with this particular genre of writing. Most enjoyable. Thank you for visiting my page and I'm certainly interested in the melody in your head.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-17142071048651702082017-04-09T08:54:10.312-04:002017-04-09T08:54:10.312-04:00Sure had great flow as a dream soaring you did goSure had great flow as a dream soaring you did goPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-55645435924333985462017-04-08T19:12:49.327-04:002017-04-08T19:12:49.327-04:00Lyrical and lovely. Thank you.Lyrical and lovely. Thank you.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.com