tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post5134356492568677132..comments2024-03-28T13:07:53.686-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: dVerse June 1, 2013 Cleansing - Bathroom prompt hosted by ClaudiaTruedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-26264245250022326312013-06-03T12:48:09.096-04:002013-06-03T12:48:09.096-04:00Akila
Thank. you so much! Have a great day.Akila<br /><br />Thank. you so much! Have a great day.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-29110659489077041692013-06-03T09:14:14.382-04:002013-06-03T09:14:14.382-04:00I loved how you played your thoughts here!I loved how you played your thoughts here!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-40451442704505369902013-06-02T16:21:38.370-04:002013-06-02T16:21:38.370-04:00Thank you so much for the read and reply. I always...Thank you so much for the read and reply. I always enjoy comments.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-6850756764349957162013-06-02T15:25:42.778-04:002013-06-02T15:25:42.778-04:00I love a bubble bath--and this is a nice one. My ...I love a bubble bath--and this is a nice one. My favorite stanza: <br />"sip some wine, forget about time<br /> write down a few lines<br />discovering the waterfall of my mind" and the image that stands out the most to me is the "vortex of the drain" enjoyed this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-16844796058683612972013-06-02T10:44:45.092-04:002013-06-02T10:44:45.092-04:00Laurie,
A powerful image to match a powerful fear...Laurie,<br /><br />A powerful image to match a powerful fear to have one dreams disappear...thank you...may we always hold on to our dreams.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-87141576634468596362013-06-02T10:43:15.862-04:002013-06-02T10:43:15.862-04:00cloudfactor5 - Thank you for the kind assessment o...cloudfactor5 - Thank you for the kind assessment of my work..I am glad you found something inspiring within my words. Again, thank you!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-29543963437035187162013-06-02T10:39:48.747-04:002013-06-02T10:39:48.747-04:00Thank you for the read and for mentioning the part...Thank you for the read and for mentioning the parts of the poem that you found pleasing. Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-71333971213927501452013-06-02T10:38:15.597-04:002013-06-02T10:38:15.597-04:00I enjoyed this prompt the words seemed to just flo...I enjoyed this prompt the words seemed to just flow as I thought of soaking in my tub. In fact I am going to treat myself to one of those soothing baths today. Thanks for the spark of inspiration.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-19675506637913473962013-06-02T10:36:34.605-04:002013-06-02T10:36:34.605-04:00Thank you so much for your kind words...Thank you so much for your kind words...Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-50335269109924147482013-06-02T10:35:42.001-04:002013-06-02T10:35:42.001-04:00Hello,
I agree water holds healing properties and...Hello,<br /><br />I agree water holds healing properties and whenever, I have the time I submerge myself in a bath, better yet a swim. I love the feel of water against my flesh...Thank you for the read and comment.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-47345930067128745222013-06-02T08:07:48.128-04:002013-06-02T08:07:48.128-04:00Fear of dreams swirling away in the vortex... powe...Fear of dreams swirling away in the vortex... powerful image.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-27666120040109445712013-06-02T07:46:48.232-04:002013-06-02T07:46:48.232-04:00We may have each written bubble bath poems, but I ...We may have each written bubble bath poems, but I thank you for showing me how to take the thought even farther, to mine the poetic depths of deeper thoughts !!<br />"closing my eyes, sinking...sinking<br />into a distant land where this poet can dream<br />where my thoughts take formation" !!! <br />This is excellent and really paves the way to an awesome ending !!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-17427470982108677482013-06-02T01:07:27.680-04:002013-06-02T01:07:27.680-04:00I like how after the day "rough like an angry...I like how after the day "rough like an angry sea" there is a "sinking...sinking<br />into a distant land where this poet can dream" and then absolute bliss "sip some wine, forget about time". I also liked how you ended it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-49898685803729363092013-06-02T00:40:45.511-04:002013-06-02T00:40:45.511-04:00nice..writing in the bathtub..relaxed and dreaming...nice..writing in the bathtub..relaxed and dreaming with candles and wine is a good thing..and maybe also a way to keep those dreams disappearing through the drain at the end of the bath...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-51306110274124360032013-06-02T00:07:12.954-04:002013-06-02T00:07:12.954-04:00A wonderful...no, blissful moment you share. Very ...A wonderful...no, blissful moment you share. Very healing, even to read it.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-64777343359415550252013-06-01T23:58:53.343-04:002013-06-01T23:58:53.343-04:00I would never rent an apartment or buy a house tha...I would never rent an apartment or buy a house that did not have a bathtub.water is a healer. I think it is a spiritual experience almost which you describe so well in your poem<br /><br />RallentandaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-52220367751238993302013-06-01T23:00:10.326-04:002013-06-01T23:00:10.326-04:00Hi Hank,
Thanks for your kind words. It is always...Hi Hank,<br /><br />Thanks for your kind words. It is always a pleasure to hear from you. Have a good night!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-45588842266797760332013-06-01T22:29:11.942-04:002013-06-01T22:29:11.942-04:00It's such a grand ritual when one is uninhibit...It's such a grand ritual when one is uninhibited and has all the time for it. Rightly said Trudessa!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-35382024621095786552013-06-01T21:42:05.832-04:002013-06-01T21:42:05.832-04:00Charles,
Thank you so much...Charles,<br /><br />Thank you so much...Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-8240047021318777912013-06-01T21:29:11.786-04:002013-06-01T21:29:11.786-04:00Yeah sad reality indeed
Seems to be at every feed
...Yeah sad reality indeed<br />Seems to be at every feed<br />Can't enjoy<br />For it is job ahoyPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-90692281753396733412013-06-01T21:26:05.126-04:002013-06-01T21:26:05.126-04:00Very nice! I like this one!Very nice! I like this one!marbles in my pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2013/06/01/rise-and-shine/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-29682470934575450182013-06-01T21:06:55.746-04:002013-06-01T21:06:55.746-04:00Hi Mary,
I think the setting sets the inspiration...Hi Mary,<br /><br />I think the setting sets the inspiration for relaxation and letting the mind wander. One never knows what the outcome will be. Thanks for the reply.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-27910927776964706822013-06-01T21:03:47.279-04:002013-06-01T21:03:47.279-04:00Oh, this sounds lovely, Truedessa. I liked the i...Oh, this sounds lovely, Truedessa. I liked the idea of bubbles, candles, and wine and the poetic inspiration that comes as a result of this warm and wonderful time.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-12923425512613303152013-06-01T20:57:06.045-04:002013-06-01T20:57:06.045-04:00Thanks Grace..hope you have a good one as well..Thanks Grace..hope you have a good one as well..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-20119868490119172472013-06-01T20:56:19.138-04:002013-06-01T20:56:19.138-04:00Good Evening to you,
It is nice to relax
and for...Good Evening to you,<br /><br />It is nice to relax <br />and forget about the tax<br />but, the reality is I <br />usually have to take a <br />quick shower, as I zip<br />off to work five days a week<br />So, when I have the time, away<br />I slip into the warm waters<br />to dream a bit...<br /><br />Have a good night! (Dream big)Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.com