tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post5885055955661449578..comments2024-03-29T03:07:01.375-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: Dream or Reality?Truedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-27966989675371916172015-01-10T17:17:41.242-05:002015-01-10T17:17:41.242-05:00this reminds me of a fairytale, though it also ask...this reminds me of a fairytale, though it also asks for answers and reassurance. i love the imagery of the firelight and the fog...i could imagine such a hazy illumination. Stacy M.S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/17768743830360856158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-29920582516017325942015-01-09T13:04:38.883-05:002015-01-09T13:04:38.883-05:00Fog always creates such atmosphere and including i...Fog always creates such atmosphere and including it as an-almost character in this poem works so well. Mysterious, almost eerie.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-80563918529152819222015-01-09T11:21:28.930-05:002015-01-09T11:21:28.930-05:00What a vivid piece. You did a great job with the ...What a vivid piece. You did a great job with the blackout. Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-63768318385102554572015-01-09T11:09:09.800-05:002015-01-09T11:09:09.800-05:00The deer made me think of the Unicorn. A spiritua...The deer made me think of the Unicorn. A spiritual beast one can only meet in dreams or meditation on the inner planes.<br />Tigerbritehttp://www.planetcyberluz.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-76099036618239713702015-01-09T11:04:39.993-05:002015-01-09T11:04:39.993-05:00I like the idea of the deer licking the hand. That...I like the idea of the deer licking the hand. That sounds very, very peaceful to me...whether it is the real world or a dream world!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-38443095074309190252015-01-09T10:44:44.845-05:002015-01-09T10:44:44.845-05:00This feels like the beginning of some sort of dyst...This feels like the beginning of some sort of dystopian novel. These lines certainly create some kind of mystery.Gabriellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09968615376035959259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-20559848703883451542015-01-09T09:55:52.268-05:002015-01-09T09:55:52.268-05:00What a beautiful, dreamlike place you took us to. ...What a beautiful, dreamlike place you took us to. Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-69570514548969299012015-01-09T08:53:04.704-05:002015-01-09T08:53:04.704-05:00Had a dream quality to it indeed, as bambi even pl...Had a dream quality to it indeed, as bambi even played a part lol my mind went to wearing with the f-fog. Hopefully your eyes it doesn't clog.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-26844720064171073602015-01-09T08:07:50.549-05:002015-01-09T08:07:50.549-05:00This turned out beautifully ~ I like the soul wal...This turned out beautifully ~ I like the soul walking in the fog, and the seemingly dream like reality ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-90299262248584494132015-01-09T00:47:29.109-05:002015-01-09T00:47:29.109-05:00Such dreariness .. Sounds like a version of Eden. ...Such dreariness .. Sounds like a version of Eden. The deer lickin the hand... A wonderful image.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-16263313234771730152015-01-09T00:33:44.244-05:002015-01-09T00:33:44.244-05:00Oh.. a deer licking the hand. I want it to be real...Oh.. a deer licking the hand. I want it to be real. I like the voice that you have given to the poem.Prajaktahttps://anarmchairperfectionist.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-53368278762846498562015-01-08T23:41:50.120-05:002015-01-08T23:41:50.120-05:00it would be so comfortable to wake to a deer licki...it would be so comfortable to wake to a deer licking the hand... that is a wonderful imageClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-4849635724738841022015-01-08T22:53:34.856-05:002015-01-08T22:53:34.856-05:00Wow, and speak they did. I MUST try this form. Can...Wow, and speak they did. I MUST try this form. Cant find the right book though.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-974637843837267862015-01-08T22:41:04.115-05:002015-01-08T22:41:04.115-05:00You took to this challenge brilliantly; & even...You took to this challenge brilliantly; & even though the blackout process often leads us into abstract reality, your piece had a cohesive sense of place, a workable sense of mystery; nice job. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-43898016019439737242015-01-08T22:23:48.916-05:002015-01-08T22:23:48.916-05:00A whole story in a few fragments!A whole story in a few fragments!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-81421892959704812572015-01-08T22:23:17.931-05:002015-01-08T22:23:17.931-05:00wow. vivid...love the deer next to you licking you...wow. vivid...love the deer next to you licking your hand...gives it a surreal feel...are you going to wake me every night...makes me wonder who you are talking to there...as if you know but we do not...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-17228547543572918172015-01-08T21:55:29.053-05:002015-01-08T21:55:29.053-05:00And they flowed so well!And they flowed so well!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.com