tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post5886318786848707811..comments2024-03-29T03:07:01.375-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: Words - dVerse May 9, 2013Truedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-46897528881885902672013-05-11T15:08:27.061-04:002013-05-11T15:08:27.061-04:00"as tasteful as sparkling wine" I like t..."as tasteful as sparkling wine" I like that line..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-5340245710898270202013-05-11T15:06:33.176-04:002013-05-11T15:06:33.176-04:00Hi Steve,
Thank you for your kind comment. Sorry,...Hi Steve,<br /><br />Thank you for your kind comment. Sorry, to say I was not on a transcontinental train - even though I imagine it would be an amazing trip. I think the travel was more of a soul journey. Thanks again!<br /><br />Have a great day!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-26842051679008223242013-05-11T14:02:31.940-04:002013-05-11T14:02:31.940-04:00So beautifully descriptive, the depth of a writer&...So beautifully descriptive, the depth of a writer's being, spilling forth in "ink". Really NICE!<br /><br />"...our souls engage as we travel westwards."<br /><br />So were you on a transcontinental train? Canada?<br />(Just kidding!)steveronihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04010875412308487592noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-27582335299273226892013-05-11T10:42:18.141-04:002013-05-11T10:42:18.141-04:00'Making love with words...' as tasteful as...<b>'Making love with words...' as tasteful as sparkling wine</b><br />So much classier, too, than my <i>blue</i> <a href="http://thebluegrumpster.blogspot.nl/2013/04/ding-dong-in-my-garden.html?utm_source=BP_recent" rel="nofollow"><b>Ding-Dong</b></a> lines... ;)Blue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-47233870369735342642013-05-11T09:53:05.468-04:002013-05-11T09:53:05.468-04:00Good Morning,
Thanks for the note and I do unders...Good Morning,<br /><br />Thanks for the note and I do understand the blues. Just relax my friend as sometimes it is all we can do:)<br /><br />Wishing you a great weekend as well....Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-75517790703238814242013-05-11T09:49:46.946-04:002013-05-11T09:49:46.946-04:00ayala,
Thank you so much!ayala,<br /><br />Thank you so much!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-46040307411352402212013-05-11T09:49:26.411-04:002013-05-11T09:49:26.411-04:00Kelvin,
Thank you so much for visiting and the lo...Kelvin,<br /><br />Thank you so much for visiting and the lovely comment. Have a great day!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-23282242442734509532013-05-11T07:10:31.539-04:002013-05-11T07:10:31.539-04:00Beautiful poem! :)Beautiful poem! :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-12172378553266044912013-05-11T06:49:44.892-04:002013-05-11T06:49:44.892-04:00Oh why so blue? Truedessa I ask myself the same qu...<b><i>Oh why so blue?</i></b> Truedessa I ask myself the same question on a daily basis. I've been this way as long as I can remember. Ever seen a melancholic 8-year-old? I was one of those. I guess it's hard-wired, but that's alright. I've given up on denying what's brutally obvious.<br /><br />The blues... I love them. Something tells me you could've guessed :)<br /><br />Have a great weekend.Blue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-44255886234407637422013-05-11T01:21:54.070-04:002013-05-11T01:21:54.070-04:00Beautiful! like Brian i like the intimacy you put ...Beautiful! like Brian i like the intimacy you put in your words... affecting & engaging... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-60664658773423990592013-05-10T19:20:43.526-04:002013-05-10T19:20:43.526-04:00Got you addicted
But don't be conflicted
Just ...Got you addicted<br />But don't be conflicted<br />Just rhyme away<br />And pffft to the rules I sayPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-63665998837218376452013-05-10T16:54:05.340-04:002013-05-10T16:54:05.340-04:00Blue Grumpster,
I may have had a bit of inspirat...Blue Grumpster,<br /><br /> I may have had a bit of inspiration on my journey recently. So, tell me why so blue..makes me want to write a blues song..oh, wait I have already written a few. Perhaps, I will post one soon.<br /><br />Nothing like the color blue..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-36788322373942074792013-05-10T16:44:16.497-04:002013-05-10T16:44:16.497-04:00Hello,
Thanks for stopping in and reading my work...Hello,<br /><br />Thanks for stopping in and reading my work. Your kindness is appreciated.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-45503580061953941202013-05-10T15:06:23.850-04:002013-05-10T15:06:23.850-04:00'...we fit perfectly, a warm satin glove......<b>'...we fit perfectly, a warm satin glove...'</b><br />Is it hot in here or has someone been inspired? ;)Blue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-82197543569120359262013-05-10T11:53:49.037-04:002013-05-10T11:53:49.037-04:00What a stunning poem! I'm in awe at the creat...What a stunning poem! I'm in awe at the creativity poems display. Your images are lovely. I have to use a rhyming dictionary just to make a two line response to Pat (above)!Fundy Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02132147630106183853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-9852154154733926872013-05-10T11:52:48.709-04:002013-05-10T11:52:48.709-04:00There he is my friend Pat
and how is the cat this ...There he is my friend Pat<br />and how is the cat this fine day<br />I played with some words but<br />seems I didn't get it quite right<br />but, that is ok still fun to do<br />will give it a whirl another time<br />been busy working on another<br />song shouldn't be too long<br />glad you came over to play<br />So to that I say hey!<br /><br />PS seems I even have to rhyme what I say to you..Laughing<br />Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-72507486505277145642013-05-10T11:20:04.369-04:002013-05-10T11:20:04.369-04:00Hi
Thanks for the comment whether good or bad new...Hi<br /><br />Thanks for the comment whether good or bad news (smiling) with that being said it was fun to write whether I kept to form or not. It is always good to try new concepts. I guess that is why I enjoy free verse or writing my songs. Thank you for seeing the whole piece in whatever form it is..thanks again for you insight!<br />Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-35235917828095458832013-05-10T11:15:13.593-04:002013-05-10T11:15:13.593-04:00Look at you go
Being all sensual with words at you...Look at you go<br />Being all sensual with words at your show<br />As they bring for a chime<br />That is surely sublime<br />Even for a mime<br />But watch out, in some places saying or doing such things is a crime LOLPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-6516062904919679952013-05-10T11:08:00.502-04:002013-05-10T11:08:00.502-04:00OK - first the bad news; this is neither terza rim...OK - first the bad news; this is neither terza rima nor a terza rima sonnet ...<br /><br />but what we do have here is a lovely, intimate, sensuous sonnet that follows the Shakespearean rhyme pattern perfectly and has some fabulous imagery. Well written.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-48456197306879861242013-05-10T09:23:09.550-04:002013-05-10T09:23:09.550-04:00Grace
Thank you I think I was caught up in the St...Grace<br /><br />Thank you I think I was caught up in the Stanza rhyme and lost it in the flow of the whole piece. I will revamp it after work. should be easy to do without losing the integrity of my words.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-76793476135139885922013-05-10T09:21:00.358-04:002013-05-10T09:21:00.358-04:00Mary thanks so much! Mary thanks so much! Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-26034491240471840652013-05-10T09:03:23.799-04:002013-05-10T09:03:23.799-04:00Passionate write specially the ink spilling and fi...Passionate write specially the ink spilling and fitting perfectly with the glove ~ <br /><br />As to the form though, the ending words for the rhyming pattern was not followed example: night (line 4) should also rhyme with line 6 (not love) ~ You can refer to Tony's pattern in the post ~<br /><br />Over-all a lovely work though, very romantic voice ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-14605144789141932272013-05-10T07:50:04.472-04:002013-05-10T07:50:04.472-04:00This is beautiful, Truedessa. I love especially ...This is beautiful, Truedessa. I love especially the first two lines which I found particularly clever.<br /><br />making love with our words<br />naked on sheets of white<br /><br />So much sweetness throughout!<br /><br />Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-8245803105763437702013-05-10T06:11:22.036-04:002013-05-10T06:11:22.036-04:00Good Morning,
Thank you for the read and reply it...Good Morning,<br /><br />Thank you for the read and reply it is always nice to say hi to you!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-48265718794593082702013-05-10T01:16:01.708-04:002013-05-10T01:16:01.708-04:00A lovely love poem. And I like the flow of it a lo...A lovely love poem. And I like the flow of it a lot. brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.com