tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post2207893087487532787..comments2024-03-28T08:09:20.929-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: A Mournful SongTruedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-57192281682801717572016-11-30T19:39:58.004-05:002016-11-30T19:39:58.004-05:00Thanks Martin!Thanks Martin!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-64273992265469329792016-11-30T17:19:53.228-05:002016-11-30T17:19:53.228-05:00Well composed insight. This is good because we rel...Well composed insight. This is good because we relate.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-34613809677303610642016-11-30T16:22:05.010-05:002016-11-30T16:22:05.010-05:00Hey, Good to see you again :-)Hey, Good to see you again :-)Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-59287013249481068132016-11-30T13:47:29.537-05:002016-11-30T13:47:29.537-05:00SMiLes.. mY FriEnd
tHeRe was actually
a now wHere ...SMiLes.. mY FriEnd<br />tHeRe was actually<br />a now wHere a bird<br />SonG i could not stand..<br />a cricket in<br />Bedroom<br />a Freight<br />train over <br />ears<br />and<br />a Street<br />Lamp at<br />3 AM brighter<br />below that staring<br />a sun in the eYes of mine..<br />so far back<br />then<br />in <br />HeLL wHere<br />any contact<br />of Nature hurt<br />as death as liFe..<br />hmm..<br />polar<br />opposite now<br />all SpRinG aLL noW..:)Katie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-29396037805894227602016-11-30T13:05:25.457-05:002016-11-30T13:05:25.457-05:00At 3:00 am you might hear a different kind of song...At 3:00 am you might hear a different kind of song!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-60620423655976496192016-11-30T13:04:04.106-05:002016-11-30T13:04:04.106-05:00Thanks for visiting it does leave a question?Thanks for visiting it does leave a question?Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-63281489999387358362016-11-30T13:03:05.395-05:002016-11-30T13:03:05.395-05:00Thanks Grace well I guess some songs can be melanc...Thanks Grace well I guess some songs can be melancholyTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-31397380729860461902016-11-30T13:02:07.538-05:002016-11-30T13:02:07.538-05:00Thank you Bryan for an interesting prompt!Thank you Bryan for an interesting prompt!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-41423395315057587192016-11-30T13:01:27.883-05:002016-11-30T13:01:27.883-05:00Sherry that is true as the heart is heavySherry that is true as the heart is heavyTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-6664845073833615432016-11-30T13:00:48.450-05:002016-11-30T13:00:48.450-05:00Thanks, It was a fun promptThanks, It was a fun promptTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-61324220341730843202016-11-30T12:59:12.479-05:002016-11-30T12:59:12.479-05:00Thanks, it was fun to write with a bit of help fro...Thanks, it was fun to write with a bit of help from Mr. FrostTruedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-65049928741479409202016-11-30T12:58:08.305-05:002016-11-30T12:58:08.305-05:00Well, sometimes we need a birdsong to perk us up!Well, sometimes we need a birdsong to perk us up!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-84394888173310946082016-11-30T12:57:21.933-05:002016-11-30T12:57:21.933-05:00Thanks Alex you made me smile. Thanks Alex you made me smile. Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-48090819076654744672016-11-30T11:05:14.477-05:002016-11-30T11:05:14.477-05:00If it's not 3 AM in the morning I would know t...If it's not 3 AM in the morning I would know that I would be wrong trying to silence songs.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-88519541112575174352016-11-30T10:02:45.563-05:002016-11-30T10:02:45.563-05:00I love it! It makes me wonder what has the speaker...I love it! It makes me wonder what has the speaker so down. =) Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-62272138228561903382016-11-30T07:56:54.524-05:002016-11-30T07:56:54.524-05:00I think yours is better!
Don't mind the birds ...I think yours is better!<br />Don't mind the birds unless it's the crack of dawn on a Saturday.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-72310264881975110572016-11-30T07:53:40.274-05:002016-11-30T07:53:40.274-05:00That is Robert Frost's stone home in Vermont, ...That is Robert Frost's stone home in Vermont, it is very lovely and now a museum. His poetry hangs on the walls. I had a wonderful time there. Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-51787177956179747292016-11-30T07:50:05.174-05:002016-11-30T07:50:05.174-05:00Haha I listen to birdsongs everyday, as mine alway...Haha I listen to birdsongs everyday, as mine always has her way!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-47778144706632211702016-11-30T07:45:34.222-05:002016-11-30T07:45:34.222-05:00Sometimes they can just annoy even as they try and...Sometimes they can just annoy even as they try and bring joy. Send out a cat, fixes that lolPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-63808773945404119662016-11-30T00:37:55.704-05:002016-11-30T00:37:55.704-05:00Enjoyed your words but LOVE the house in your pict...Enjoyed your words but LOVE the house in your picture. Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-77167315605973678542016-11-29T22:52:01.788-05:002016-11-29T22:52:01.788-05:00Love your extrapolation, despite finding comfort o...Love your extrapolation, despite finding comfort on dark days in bird song.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-74786435095621358672016-11-29T21:35:59.215-05:002016-11-29T21:35:59.215-05:00Loved your version. Both really nice. Fascinating...Loved your version. Both really nice. FascinatingSabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-55418720181754096432016-11-29T21:26:24.626-05:002016-11-29T21:26:24.626-05:00I like your take on Robert Frost's poem. Your...I like your take on Robert Frost's poem. Yours is a robin, and not wanting to be cheered from mourning. It goes farther than Frost's. The extension is great!Waltermarkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619428258264938946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-47918829633048402142016-11-29T21:12:46.163-05:002016-11-29T21:12:46.163-05:00I love your poem, Truedessa. There are times, when...I love your poem, Truedessa. There are times, when in grief, one cannot bear the joy in birdsong.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-8272824234907569622016-11-29T21:05:39.652-05:002016-11-29T21:05:39.652-05:00I love both the original poem and your response Tr...I love both the original poem and your response Truedessa ~ It is indeed a mournful song but well done ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com