tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post3193281257297074957..comments2024-03-28T06:30:04.847-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: Sunday Mini Challenge - Release Your Inner Wild WomanTruedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-67667809815337686112013-03-28T21:56:50.873-04:002013-03-28T21:56:50.873-04:00Sherry,
I am glad I could offer some words of com...Sherry,<br /><br />I am glad I could offer some words of comfort. You are truly an amazing tree with your strength and strong roots.<br /><br />Peace..Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-49469020333725203912013-03-24T23:56:26.278-04:002013-03-24T23:56:26.278-04:00Truedessa, thanks for your insightful comment on J...Truedessa, thanks for your insightful comment on Jeff's song. My son - brilliant, a dreamer, a mystic, a poet and a musician and composer of classical music (self-taught) - was stricken with schizophrenia at seventeen. His has been a precarious journey through this world and his and my relationship grew exponentially through the depth of his suffering and my determination not to let him go......so you sense very accurately. He has always been tethered lightly to the earth and he has told me the fact he is still here is because of me. I had to learn to "Be a Tree" to stay steady for him. Thanks for caring.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-81758511375904063892013-03-24T21:58:19.493-04:002013-03-24T21:58:19.493-04:00Kay,
Thank you for your insightful comment and I ...Kay,<br /><br />Thank you for your insightful comment and I am glad you enjoyed the poem but, Ella's picture was the inspiration for the write.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-41675021058507945782013-03-24T20:50:09.968-04:002013-03-24T20:50:09.968-04:00Your poem is a perfect accompaniment to Ella's...Your poem is a perfect accompaniment to Ella's picture. To see the woman in the wolf, the wolf in the tree, and the tree in the whole...<br />Beautifully done.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-37180288429857515042013-03-24T19:40:13.683-04:002013-03-24T19:40:13.683-04:00Hi Helen,
Thanks so much!Hi Helen,<br /><br />Thanks so much!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-60650524797998219042013-03-24T19:39:54.152-04:002013-03-24T19:39:54.152-04:00Hi Kim,
Thanks for the helpful comments. It is ap...Hi Kim,<br /><br />Thanks for the helpful comments. It is appreciated.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-73446686983005038122013-03-24T19:39:00.814-04:002013-03-24T19:39:00.814-04:00I feel her story ... mystic and magic in every lin...I feel her story ... mystic and magic in every line.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-29849303969404261532013-03-24T19:23:45.749-04:002013-03-24T19:23:45.749-04:00Robyn,
Thank you for reading and the reply!Robyn, <br /><br />Thank you for reading and the reply!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-4915587229354535632013-03-24T19:16:15.337-04:002013-03-24T19:16:15.337-04:00Lots of great lines and images here... dancing at ...Lots of great lines and images here... dancing at the edge of ancestors' fires... spirit entwined with mystic powers... eerie howls echoing through chambers... You create a vivid picture for the reader.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-77326843212062526172013-03-24T18:34:39.919-04:002013-03-24T18:34:39.919-04:00I could feel the spirit of the she wolf woman in y...I could feel the spirit of the she wolf woman in your words. I like the line - wishing to never journey alone.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13318991328136593536noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-82347205715897196052013-03-24T16:59:11.702-04:002013-03-24T16:59:11.702-04:00Hi Brian,
Nice to see you again! I am glad you we...Hi Brian,<br /><br />Nice to see you again! I am glad you were able to see something within the words. Thank you for your reply.<br /><br />Have a great day!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-83646705324609294442013-03-24T16:57:35.791-04:002013-03-24T16:57:35.791-04:00Sherry,
I am so pleased that my poem spoke to you...Sherry,<br /><br />I am so pleased that my poem spoke to you in such a deep manner. The words came easy once I saw the picture it seemed the wolf woman wanted her story told.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-50952804183451846012013-03-24T14:39:09.765-04:002013-03-24T14:39:09.765-04:00 wolf woman hovers within the trees
her spirit ent... wolf woman hovers within the trees<br />her spirit entwined with mystic powers<br />beware her black eyes, for they have seen<br /><br />really like that part...and the acknowledgement that she sees....but also her hearts cry in that last stanza as well....very nice...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-36906900473079565722013-03-24T13:02:37.483-04:002013-03-24T13:02:37.483-04:00Oh my goodness, what a magnificent poem. As I read...Oh my goodness, what a magnificent poem. As I read I realized I loved every line so much that if I picked out favorites I would be rewriting the entire poem. This was like a cool restorative drink in the desert, an affirmation, and a cry for freedom from the wolfish heart. It SPOKE to me. I love that you dreamed of the she wolf..... love the visionaries, wolf woman, shape shifters, and ties to the ancients. Favorite line has to be "her spirit runs wild, a roaring river." Sigh. What a glorious read this is. Thank you.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-15122960764911518882013-03-24T12:52:32.400-04:002013-03-24T12:52:32.400-04:00Ella,
Thank you so much!Ella,<br /><br />Thank you so much!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-60877528821079725942013-03-24T12:34:10.186-04:002013-03-24T12:34:10.186-04:00Beautiful...and sometimes we do journey alone, til...Beautiful...and sometimes we do journey alone, till we find kindred spirits~<br />This was lovely~Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-67900464200885428522013-03-24T12:18:21.510-04:002013-03-24T12:18:21.510-04:00Kerry,
Thank you so much for the generous comment...Kerry,<br /><br />Thank you so much for the generous comment. It is greatly appreciated.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-39870235253683633942013-03-24T11:07:37.638-04:002013-03-24T11:07:37.638-04:00You have captured the spirit of wild women the wor...You have captured the spirit of wild women the world over.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-4069844404791204512013-03-24T10:34:12.440-04:002013-03-24T10:34:12.440-04:00Thanks for the reply!Thanks for the reply!Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-83766176821407320212013-03-24T10:33:24.103-04:002013-03-24T10:33:24.103-04:00Good Morning Pat,
Glad to see you at my flat and ...Good Morning Pat,<br /><br />Glad to see you at my flat and thanks so much for the feedback. Happy Birthday!<br />Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-43049694636930845442013-03-24T10:17:47.572-04:002013-03-24T10:17:47.572-04:00very neatly woven lines... I enjoyed it as a poetr...very neatly woven lines... I enjoyed it as a poetry... somehow I don't like the 'freeing the inner wild woman' in the form of a she wolf... lol... <br />Cheers :)Anunoy Samantahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905889730100625277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-8833132543376490132013-03-24T10:06:44.422-04:002013-03-24T10:06:44.422-04:00Great flow and rhyme
With your ancient rhyme
Remem...Great flow and rhyme<br />With your ancient rhyme<br />Remembering the ways <br />Of past days<br />And bringing for the spirit<br />That sure doesn`t fear it<br />Is sure the way to go<br />Dream on at your showPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-12069429138025680182013-03-24T10:06:33.826-04:002013-03-24T10:06:33.826-04:00Heaven,
Thank you for the reply and I agree it is...Heaven,<br /><br />Thank you for the reply and I agree it is important to remember the ties of the past as they are clues to the future.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-83493964622757626602013-03-24T08:30:22.006-04:002013-03-24T08:30:22.006-04:00I think it is important to remember those ancient ...I think it is important to remember those ancient ties. These lines resonated with me: <br /><br />where is my land, where is my home<br />a place wild and free to roam<br /><br />Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.com