tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post3366483422360596907..comments2024-03-27T20:40:46.231-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: After The Rain - I'll Sing A RefrainTruedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-76543844075349902172019-12-05T19:29:42.503-05:002019-12-05T19:29:42.503-05:00I love it.<b>I love it.</b>Blue Grumpsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03106493133778319165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-35648972441823836972019-11-25T20:27:28.496-05:002019-11-25T20:27:28.496-05:00An exquisite Villanelle, all beginning with that s...An exquisite Villanelle, all beginning with that single tear.purplepeninportland.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07842681508730093858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-29930998287309526132019-11-25T07:30:54.029-05:002019-11-25T07:30:54.029-05:00Tears are definitely better when they are lonesom...Tears are definitely better when they are lonesome than when they come in company! DEZMONDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14127166104359407763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-52068804794782426322019-11-25T04:06:34.993-05:002019-11-25T04:06:34.993-05:00Superb. Following on GFC. My sincere compliments. ...Superb. Following on GFC. My sincere compliments. Geo.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16221314320558128986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-20756983027390065152019-11-24T23:34:22.557-05:002019-11-24T23:34:22.557-05:00Oh yes, that single tear can release the floodgate...Oh yes, that single tear can release the floodgates... and bring on healing!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-86952352176626904112019-11-24T23:19:50.474-05:002019-11-24T23:19:50.474-05:00Great selection of the first three lines that need...Great selection of the first three lines that need to repeat in this form!Thotpurgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09729170517164200003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-15374256826284003402019-11-24T23:11:57.571-05:002019-11-24T23:11:57.571-05:00The rhymes and repetitions help give a wonderfully...The rhymes and repetitions help give a wonderfully reassuring feel which underpins the meaning.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-74685429785886148772019-11-24T21:32:16.427-05:002019-11-24T21:32:16.427-05:00Sweetly sad. Sweetly sad. Colleen Looseleafhttp://looseleafnotes.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-11666272147676506282019-11-24T20:59:47.587-05:002019-11-24T20:59:47.587-05:00Tears are like rain and it starts with a single on...Tears are like rain and it starts with a single one. A sad take on things but hope stillJoel (@Stranded Tree)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00088694600301047120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-32957565364408224612019-11-24T18:20:03.932-05:002019-11-24T18:20:03.932-05:00What a splendid villanelle True! After the rain, m...What a splendid villanelle True! After the rain, much is clear.robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-44066261775387939812019-11-24T18:14:35.724-05:002019-11-24T18:14:35.724-05:00I love the flow in this and the repitation reaffir...I love the flow in this and the repitation reaffirms the message! This is beautiful Truedessa!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-36936167847600665602019-11-24T17:48:40.940-05:002019-11-24T17:48:40.940-05:00Sometimes I think that is all we can ask for--that...Sometimes I think that is all we can ask for--that time will fix things--I can't write a villanelle to save my life--you make it look so easy!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-71156660723659659932019-11-24T17:21:40.086-05:002019-11-24T17:21:40.086-05:00Wow! What a haunting refrain/repetition. Great j...Wow! What a haunting refrain/repetition. Great job with the villanelle … a challenging form!Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-43047093828232628992019-11-24T15:25:53.907-05:002019-11-24T15:25:53.907-05:00This is a well done villanelle! This is a well done villanelle! Revived Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14301802530562243078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-82792824791342467392019-11-24T14:20:33.126-05:002019-11-24T14:20:33.126-05:00This is beautifully evocative!!❤️ I especially lov...This is beautifully evocative!!❤️ I especially love; "what lies beyond this earthly sphere there's a place my soul seems to know."Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-85570997664114153832019-11-24T13:40:15.332-05:002019-11-24T13:40:15.332-05:00I love this. The promises repeating - faith in cla...I love this. The promises repeating - faith in clarity's return.H. Hennenburghttps://www.hennenburg.com/poetry/while-there-is-still-time/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-50702435955894487922019-11-24T11:30:54.706-05:002019-11-24T11:30:54.706-05:00What a wonderful Villanelle... I feel both sorrow ...What a wonderful Villanelle... I feel both sorrow and blessing coming from that original tear.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-38903818477370013422019-11-24T08:19:28.706-05:002019-11-24T08:19:28.706-05:00Can't rain all the time - the storms will pass...Can't rain all the time - the storms will pass.Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-47351710223258398242019-11-24T07:32:11.833-05:002019-11-24T07:32:11.833-05:00Holding onto dreams even through the rain is what ...Holding onto dreams even through the rain is what can keep us goingPat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-18875018284326125942019-11-23T21:54:30.588-05:002019-11-23T21:54:30.588-05:00Beautiful, True.....dreams, tears, hope, and that ...Beautiful, True.....dreams, tears, hope, and that higher plateau.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com