tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post767120455153373784..comments2024-03-28T06:30:04.847-04:00Comments on True Wanderings: I'll Give You This SongTruedessahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-9634393656497708022017-09-22T23:08:38.977-04:002017-09-22T23:08:38.977-04:00Giving your heart is everything! "In the dea...Giving your heart is everything! "In the dead of night, part of me died." ~ The perfect description of a heart rejected.Fundy Bluehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02132147630106183853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-1264050075445265312017-09-18T17:42:09.048-04:002017-09-18T17:42:09.048-04:00Such a heartwarming poem and lovely form indeed. Such a heartwarming poem and lovely form indeed. Blogorattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12821621371176285384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-38387993294951287922017-09-18T14:27:03.638-04:002017-09-18T14:27:03.638-04:00I love this. A song, the gift of love, is possibly...I love this. A song, the gift of love, is possibly one of the greatest gifts we have to give another person.A Beer for the Showerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17029139745335325356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-57171166281996188082017-09-18T13:11:15.379-04:002017-09-18T13:11:15.379-04:00I really like the chorus in this poem....What beau...I really like the chorus in this poem....What beautifully expressed love - whether dream or reality.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-51893283264438349322017-09-18T12:23:56.292-04:002017-09-18T12:23:56.292-04:00I certainly enjoyed your poetical lyrics and can h...I certainly enjoyed your poetical lyrics and can hear soft acoustic guitar accompaniment to this. From the outset I enjoyed a mystical feel to your narrative too.Julianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16781106976505685053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-49042770158778725322017-09-18T09:44:19.606-04:002017-09-18T09:44:19.606-04:00Very dream like, would be a wonderful love song!Very dream like, would be a wonderful love song!annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-20800821070310303642017-09-18T07:29:32.672-04:002017-09-18T07:29:32.672-04:00Wonderful song lyrics; I could almost hear the mus...Wonderful song lyrics; I could almost hear the music.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-13680485573179376572017-09-18T04:10:57.685-04:002017-09-18T04:10:57.685-04:00This is absolutely stunning!! Especially love; &qu...This is absolutely stunning!! Especially love; "surrendering my love, waves of delight waiting for you in our secret place on wide wings my heart takes flight soft fingertips, outline your face"...Beautifully executed.Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-650672863756466632017-09-17T23:51:11.294-04:002017-09-17T23:51:11.294-04:00The heart is a lot, indeed... It's everything....The heart is a lot, indeed... It's everything. Such a gift to give (and receive). Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-87602900555082451362017-09-17T20:56:53.870-04:002017-09-17T20:56:53.870-04:00Thia truly is a song ... some wonderful lines/lyri...Thia truly is a song ... some wonderful lines/lyrics in this. If you are not already a lyricist (at least part-time) your calling is knocking. Wendy Bourkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09475940407969993348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-91576962040183559232017-09-17T19:31:35.952-04:002017-09-17T19:31:35.952-04:00Well, it was quite a dream ... and so beautifully...Well, it was quite a dream ... and so beautifully portrayed!indybevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05505539407819784525noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-40374521875244532902017-09-17T18:30:55.484-04:002017-09-17T18:30:55.484-04:00I agree it is like a song....it flows like music.....I agree it is like a song....it flows like music...beautiful!Donna@LivingFromHappinesshttp://www.livingfromhappiness.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-4527951950378470712017-09-17T06:53:41.021-04:002017-09-17T06:53:41.021-04:00Yes, those are lyrics to an unsung song. And one a...Yes, those are lyrics to an unsung song. And one anyone in love would want to hear from his lover. Very moving!Alex J. Cavanaughhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09770065693345181702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-2149262655398516792017-09-16T21:19:09.517-04:002017-09-16T21:19:09.517-04:00Wow! Well composed lyrical poem. ...and there we w...Wow! Well composed lyrical poem. ...and there we were singing along with you. Then you remind us it was just a song (dream).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-62482795289549500342017-09-16T16:24:00.151-04:002017-09-16T16:24:00.151-04:00Sure a dream to grasp from beginning to end. This ...Sure a dream to grasp from beginning to end. This one would truly make a great tune too. Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-43228174122175494482017-09-16T12:11:26.550-04:002017-09-16T12:11:26.550-04:00This is SO moving and beautiful. "I'll gi...This is SO moving and beautiful. "I'll give you this song, it's all I've got".......so much love in this poem, and sadness too that that much love did not merit that front row seat. One of my favourites of yours, my friend.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3134456815105334121.post-2418553755838691902017-09-16T11:02:00.318-04:002017-09-16T11:02:00.318-04:00This is amazing! dreamlike and what a romantic env...This is amazing! dreamlike and what a romantic environ. I truly like your writing style, it gives soul and sweetness to the poetry. For me poetry should always be the one which fills us with happiness and wonder and we forget the worldly affairs. Dr. Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07812039483229217149noreply@blogger.com