I woke up this morning with a song
and all I could do was think of you
remembering each word we wrote
a collaboration from two hearts
searching for light in the lost & found
peering deep
down, I dug around
feeling empty, in
a one way town
to my surprise , your face appeared
I was there to help you stand
you were there to hold my hand
I woke up this morning with a song
and all I could do was think of you
remembering we're better together
than two lost souls falling apart
Searching for light in the lost and found
who's says what is lost cannot be found
for there you were waiting for me
to pull you out, a
mix matched pair
I was there to help you stand
you were there to hold my hand
sharing with poets united
sharing with poets united
Two are always stronger than one. Nicely done!
ReplyDeletei agree...together....the rest really doesnt matter does it?
ReplyDeleteit makes everything else tolerable...nice use of the repetition in this.
love the waking with a song - and the helping each other and being there for each other...
ReplyDeleteThe sentiment is spot on.. two is better than one.. The thought of wandering in togetherness. like that.
ReplyDeleteThat mutual support is really necessary in every relationship... Beautiful sentiment and very well penned. The repetition gives it a musical feel. :-)
ReplyDelete-HA
Beautiful and speaks clearly from your own heart ~ Collaboration and togetherness with the right person does make a difference, smiles ~
ReplyDeleteJust beautiful.Truedessa!:)
ReplyDeleteWonderfully said indeed at your feed. Two beats one any day, as all the other crap they can make float away. Two becoming one is fun too lol better together than apart, favorite part indeed and more people realized that sooner together they'd stand always hand and hand
ReplyDeleteI love this "mixmaxed pair" that has found such joy.
ReplyDeleteUmmm...."mix matched." It is late and I am tired.
ReplyDeletelove the repetition that adds a force to the poem....
ReplyDeleteSeems like a dream...............
ReplyDeleteThe collaboration of two hearts is a beautiful beautiful thing isn't it??
ReplyDeleteI like the mismatching--wonderful possibilities we often overlook in search of perfection!
ReplyDeletelove the mis matched, the standing and holding.
ReplyDeleteIn the battle against life two can make it much easier!
ReplyDeletelife is better together. yes.
ReplyDeleteI have to wonder, after reading your words, how many of us have someone like this in our lives...standing and holding...waking up and remembering how good that can be...
ReplyDeleteElizabeth