Tuesday, March 11, 2014

He Loves Me

photo by Shanyn 















in blades of grass daisies sway
under wings of a blue jay sky
fresh scent nature's bouquet
spring breeze a lover's high
plucking petals, he loves me
 


posting for dVerse writing micro poetry/macro photography
photo taken from Shanyn's album..I just adore daisies..
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48 comments:

  1. RMPMarch 11, 2014

    sweet...though I wonder how many flowers she went through to get the desired result. precious piece...makes me wish for spring to finally spring forth.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Hello,

      Daisies are beautiful growing in the wild..how I wish for spring as well..

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  2. Brian MillerMarch 11, 2014

    ah...spring will def make you high...
    and i love daisies...sad too many fall
    in our quest for love you know..ha.
    hope it ends on the right answer.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      I think spring is on my mind as winter has
      been long and cold...the quest for love is
      one we all venture on...

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  3. lynndianeMarch 12, 2014

    Fresh daisies embody the hope of spring and quest for love!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Hope for fresh adventures in the journey of life..

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  4. Vandana SharmaMarch 12, 2014

    such a beautiful poem,speaking of a heart's desire

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  5. Janine BolléeMarch 12, 2014

    So nice and neat [as in 'tidy']
    Love the 'blue jay' sky.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Aprille too bad love isn't tidy....thanks for visiting..

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  6. Marina SofiaMarch 12, 2014

    I can never resist a field of daisies, either making chains or chanting 'a lot, a little, passionately, not at all' (he loves me). You capture so well that joyous feeling they give!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Daisies hold a natural beauty as we wonder does he love me or does he not..the mystery unfolds with each petal plucked..smiling..

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  7. ScarletMarch 12, 2014

    Hopefully he does, smiles ~ Loving the romantic micro poem ~

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Thanks Grace..I guess it depends on the flower..

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  8. Alex J. CavanaughMarch 12, 2014

    And if he doesn't, you find a new daisy!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      in a field of wildflowers there must be one that does...

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  9. Optimistic ExistentialistMarch 12, 2014

    Ah I loved this. Brought back memories of when I used to do this to daisy petals dreaming of my first girlfriend lol

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Good Morning Keith,

      I think we all have dreamy memories of plucking petals to find the hidden answer..lol..but, then I'm a romantic at heart so I would probably have the urge to do this today..smiling..

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  10. WolfsrosebudMarch 12, 2014

    i enjoyed how you ended this... plucking petals... oh, if spring would soon come... everything is so behind under piles of snow... though I did hear a few geese fly by yesterday

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      It would be wonderful if spring would come soon..I'm tired of winter as well..

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  11. MaryMarch 12, 2014

    I really this poem which takes me back to these childhood times of plucking petals in spring meadows. Enjoyed the photo that you chose!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Thanks Mary..I saw the photo and knew this was the one I would write about.

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  12. ayalaMarch 12, 2014

    Short and wonderful! :)

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  13. Kathy ReedMarch 12, 2014

    Daisies are a special flower...very Doris Day and "love" ;)

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  14. Cressida de NovaMarch 12, 2014

    Spring is the season of love daisies and he loves you...well bingo...you've won the prize:)

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      He loves me, he loves me not..depends on how you pick the flower I guess..

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  15. Pat HattMarch 12, 2014

    Pick and pull
    The field is full
    Then you find the one
    And love is given a run

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Out of the shadows
      & into the meadow
      plucking that special one
      under a glowing sun..

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  16. GabriellaMarch 12, 2014

    Plucking daisies is something we can all identify with. Very sweet closing line!

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  17. VictoriaMarch 12, 2014

    I have to say the daisy is right at the top of things that make me happy. Nice.

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Thanks Victoria..a daisy is a natural wildflower..

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  18. BodhiroseMarch 12, 2014

    They are the most cheerful of flowers...so free and easy. So glad he loves you...sweet.

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  19. brudbergMarch 12, 2014

    Daisies are truthful (or not).. but I do love them as they are so cheerful ...

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      Cheerful they are as they brighten any day..

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  20. AnonymousMarch 12, 2014

    Daisies are one of my favourite 'common or garden' flowers - a lovely description of what they can (or cannot) do for our hearts!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 12, 2014

      A flower that dates back to earlier times, still holds
      beauty..it must have strong roots..

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  21. Mystic_MomMarch 12, 2014

    I love that you wrote about that photo. Nicely done micropoetry!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 13, 2014

      Thank you for hosting and sharing your amazing photo's. I was inspired by the daisies.

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  22. Sherry Blue SkyMarch 12, 2014

    Beautiful, especially the blue jay sky!

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    1. TruedessaMarch 13, 2014

      Hi Sherry,

      A blue jay sky is a lovely vision for sure..

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  23. AnonymousMarch 13, 2014

    Super sweet. k.

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  24. Blue GrumpsterMarch 16, 2014

    So love that blue jay sky :)

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