| Courtesy of Pixabay |
My home
is internal
tranquility of mind
a personal sanctuary
watchful
watchful
northern wind blows
riot of windswept leaves
scattering around my being
changing
changing
southerly winds
singing into the light
contemplating a sea of blue
calmness
calmness
eastern sunrise
wonders of a new day
shades of pale gold and tinted pink
hope shines
hope shines
western sunset
closing the door of day
stars navigating the heavens
sweet dreams
dVerse Poets Pub - MTB Five Leavings from Home
Hosted by Laura
And that is where our MTB poetry prompt begins today, leaving home, the central compass point of departure, thus:
- 25 lines
- 5 stanzas –
- 1st stanza is your home (real or imaginary)
- next 4 stanzas – each compass point away from your home
- 5 lines per stanza – quintain
- syllabic structure, optional rhyme (Crown Cinquain)*
- OR
- unrhymed and unstructured (Pentastitch)
- the title should begin or include: “Five …………”
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ReplyDeleteLovely cinquain sequence
ReplyDeleteMuch love
Very well done! Loved where "home" is and the sequencing throughout! 💛
ReplyDeleteLoved the definition of home and all the different compass moods...
ReplyDeleteBravo for writing the cinquain - it fits so well with your directions and you have some lovely lyrical lines too
ReplyDelete"southerly winds
singing into the light"
This was so serene and visual. Thanks so much for sharing and have a lovely weekend.
ReplyDeleteWave upon wave describing a personal weather. 'Singing into the light' illuminates.
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ReplyDeletewestern sunset
closing the door of day
The western sunset provides a proper close for the day! Shows one is always ready and in control of the situation. A wonderful poem True!
Hank
Love how you took the aditional challenge of this poem reflecting the compass
ReplyDeleteI really liked the form of this poem, its progression and its flow. I liked how you worked in all four of the directions and the very sweet ending!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of a tricky form!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem.
ReplyDeleteWherever you go - there's the weather!
ReplyDeleteWow, this is a cool form that I havent come across before. You executed it beautifully. It is a lovely read.
ReplyDeleteI like the transitions and the compass directions. Very well done. 😊
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