Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Shades of Shadows











Craved images of you, flash before my eyes
 flood me like a lone streetlight amongst the darkness
  light flows around me,  through  me, within me
      hungry desire that needs to be satisfied
         dancing in shades of shadows


A lost love found me, in you
   and you were found in me
     in the fluidity of your presence
        in the ecstasy of our love
           we became one being

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16 comments:

  1. XSeptember 22, 2015

    You brought the heat, quite the intensity to your longing Tru.
    Sweet release there in the finding, after all that build up.

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  2. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 22, 2015

    I feel the longing here. Very beautifully written. I remember those feelings. Sometimes, I am very glad to be old. Smiles.

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  3. MELODY JACOBSeptember 23, 2015

    lovely'
    new post: http://melodyjacob1.blogspot.com/2015/09/glowwbox-september-2015.html

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  4. Katie Mia FrederickSeptember 23, 2015

    And thiS greaTest
    True Love
    alWays
    LiVES
    withIn..
    giVinG
    just
    giVinG
    whole
    WiLL
    LOVE..:)

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  5. brudbergSeptember 23, 2015

    I love a poem with a happy end.. that craving melting into unity of love.

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  6. GraceSeptember 23, 2015

    I like that ecstasy in love ending ~ Very romantic take Truedessa ~

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  7. Alex J. CavanaughSeptember 23, 2015

    And the two shall be made whole - nice!

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  8. MiskySeptember 23, 2015

    Such a sweet ending. Nicely done.

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  9. Pat HattSeptember 23, 2015

    That will sure be one passionate night as two love birds take flight haha

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  10. MarySeptember 23, 2015

    Truedessa, this is one of my very favorite poems written using these words. A very thoughtful effort, one which makes sense to me. Sensual in a beautiful way. The specific phrases get lost in the content, rather than standing out blatantly, thanks to your artistry with words! Smiles.

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  11. Glenn ButtkusSeptember 23, 2015

    So very sweet & romantic, skipping over saccharine, becoming an honest song of the heart; nicely penned. You stayed on the positive side of the prompt sentences, flooding us with aspects of love that have universal resonance; I adore the sense that two people become one more complete being when love is the common denominator.

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  12. VictoriaSeptember 23, 2015

    Lovely expression of desire and completion with skillful use of the lines Anthony gave us.

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  13. tonispencerSeptember 23, 2015

    Oh how I like the romantic-ness of this, the happy ending. So many times we think there has to be some kind of angst to make a good poem. This wonderfully disproves that. spencer is Kanzensakura

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  14. UnknownSeptember 23, 2015

    ah, such a loving and romantic light you brought to the lines. beautiful!

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  15. Debi SwimSeptember 23, 2015

    "we became one being"............ the way it should be -

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  16. ClaudiaSeptember 27, 2015

    becoming one still is the biggest mystery to me - the finding and being found - so much more than physical...

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