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searching for you in the depth of night
crossing realms into our parallel world
lying in your arms, everything felt right
in stillness, romantic thoughts swirled
I'll give you this song it's all I've got
I'll give you my
heart and that's a lot
surrendering my love, traveling fast
sharing my soul, sometimes I cried
wondering if the magic would last
in the dead of night, part of me died
if this is a dream, forget me not
if this is a dream, wake me not
if this is a dream we've shared a lot
if this is a dream, we've loved a lot
I've watched your life twist and bend
an evolving star in this earthly show
when lights dimmed, I was your friend
always on the sideline, never front row
I'll give you this song it's all I've got
I'll give you my
heart and that's a lot
caught in mists of suspended reality
afraid to open my eyes, fear of losing you
breaking the boundaries of normality
tell me our wondrous journey was true
if this is a dream, forget me not
if this is a dream, wake me not
if this is a dream we've shared a lot
if this is a dream, we've loved a lot
searching for you in the depth of night
crossing realms into our parallel world
lying in your arms, everything felt right
in stillness, romantic thoughts swirled
I'll give you this song it's all I've got
I'll give you my
heart and that's a lot
surrendering my love, waves of delight
waiting for you in our secret place
on wide wings my heart takes flight
soft fingertips, outline your face
if this is a dream, forget me not
if this is a dream, wake me not
if this is a dream we've shared a lot
if this is a dream, we've loved a lot
I'll give you this song it's all I've got
I'll give you my
heart and that's a lot
twas, just a dream it seems
This is amazing! dreamlike and what a romantic environ. I truly like your writing style, it gives soul and sweetness to the poetry. For me poetry should always be the one which fills us with happiness and wonder and we forget the worldly affairs.
ReplyDeleteThis is SO moving and beautiful. "I'll give you this song, it's all I've got".......so much love in this poem, and sadness too that that much love did not merit that front row seat. One of my favourites of yours, my friend.
ReplyDeleteSure a dream to grasp from beginning to end. This one would truly make a great tune too.
ReplyDeleteWow! Well composed lyrical poem. ...and there we were singing along with you. Then you remind us it was just a song (dream).
ReplyDeleteYes, those are lyrics to an unsung song. And one anyone in love would want to hear from his lover. Very moving!
ReplyDeleteI agree it is like a song....it flows like music...beautiful!
ReplyDeleteWell, it was quite a dream ... and so beautifully portrayed!
ReplyDeleteThia truly is a song ... some wonderful lines/lyrics in this. If you are not already a lyricist (at least part-time) your calling is knocking.
ReplyDeleteThe heart is a lot, indeed... It's everything. Such a gift to give (and receive).
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely stunning!! Especially love; "surrendering my love, waves of delight waiting for you in our secret place on wide wings my heart takes flight soft fingertips, outline your face"...Beautifully executed.
ReplyDeleteWonderful song lyrics; I could almost hear the music.
ReplyDeleteVery dream like, would be a wonderful love song!
ReplyDeleteI certainly enjoyed your poetical lyrics and can hear soft acoustic guitar accompaniment to this. From the outset I enjoyed a mystical feel to your narrative too.
ReplyDeleteI really like the chorus in this poem....What beautifully expressed love - whether dream or reality.
ReplyDeleteI love this. A song, the gift of love, is possibly one of the greatest gifts we have to give another person.
ReplyDeleteSuch a heartwarming poem and lovely form indeed.
ReplyDeleteGiving your heart is everything! "In the dead of night, part of me died." ~ The perfect description of a heart rejected.
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