Monday, September 24, 2018

Harboring Dreams


courtesy of Pixabay


I sail my ship of dreams
through dark stormy waters
carrying precious cargo
lyrical songs and poems
from my heart...

seeking a safe harbor
misty eyed, burying my
treasures hoping someday
you will navigate the stars
finding the path that
leads you to me


sharing with dVerse
writing a quadrille
consisting of 44 words
incorporating harbor




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  1. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 24, 2018

    I love your ship of dreams.....and the wishing one will navigate the stars and find their way to you.

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  2. Alex J. CavanaughSeptember 24, 2018

    Your treasure is your heart.

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 26, 2018

      That’s the sweetest thing to say, thank you Alex

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  3. tonispencerSeptember 24, 2018

    I do like your dream ship. And that it leads you home

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 26, 2018

      The ship of dreams sails every night to unknown destinies.

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  4. GinaSeptember 25, 2018

    oh your words and poetry are indeed precious cargo - this was such a lovely quadrille, seeking a safe harbour for our writing, it is truly precious to us

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 26, 2018

      Hi Gina our words are precious as they tell our stories. Thank you

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  5. Kim M. RussellSeptember 25, 2018

    A fragile ship of dreams sailing in your quadrille, Truedessa. I hope it reaches harbour safely.

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 26, 2018

      I am confident it will arrive safely, I am just not sure when exactly.

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  6. Anmol (HA)September 25, 2018

    This ship of dreams is so personal and sensitive to one's expression. I like how you describe your poetic voice as precious cargo seeking a safe harbor. The romantic touch to it is beautiful.
    -HA

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 26, 2018

      Thank you HA, I am a hopeless romantic I think..

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  7. lillianthehomepoet.wordpress.comSeptember 25, 2018

    Oh I love this....sailing with my ship of dreams, seeking a safe harbor and hoping to meet the one who can sail with me. Nicely done!

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  8. SusanSeptember 25, 2018

    Beautiful writing. This piece has touched my heart. Romantic, yet heartbreaking. You took me there!

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  9. Sanaa RizviSeptember 25, 2018

    Oh this is truly breathtaking!💜

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  10. brudbergSeptember 25, 2018

    I love your dreamy seas... and I'm sure you will find a harbor (and there will be dragons too)

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 26, 2018

      Haha Bjorn I am quite sure there will be dragons 🐉

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  11. Pat HattSeptember 25, 2018

    Two merging upon the sea as all align for them is the way to be.

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  12. The Silver FoxSeptember 25, 2018

    Ha. Excellent title, clever wordplay and your usual evocative imagery.

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 26, 2018

      Hi Silver, I am glad you liked the title as I sometimes have to ponder over titles.

      Thanks for the visit!

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  13. dorianna ricSeptember 25, 2018

    Love your ship sailing with the words and dreams from your heart hoping to meet up...images are lovley

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 26, 2018

      Thank you for visiting and leaving a comment.

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  14. GraceSeptember 26, 2018

    I hope you will find that path and it will lead you home & your love. Have a good week.

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 27, 2018

      Thanks Grace, I think I am done searching. Have a wonderful week as well.

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  15. kaykualaSeptember 27, 2018

    A safe harbor for buried treasures. How risky it would be to be buried such!

    Hank

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  16. Magic Love CrowSeptember 27, 2018

    Truedessa your words are breath taking! I treasure reading them! Thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing them! Big Hugs!

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  17. Gayle Walters RoseSeptember 28, 2018

    Truedessa, I thought for sure I left you a comment...maybe it's waiting to be approved. Let me know.
    Gayle xo

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    1. TruedessaSeptember 30, 2018

      Hi Gayle,

      I didn't have anything awaiting approval. I am not sure what happened, but I am glad you left a comment.

      Thank you!

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